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My Best Friend's Sister

Summary

Vanessa Irwin is Ashton's little sister. Luke Hemmings is the new kid to Camberwell High School in Melbourne, who just so happens to be best friends with Ashton. Luke is falling for her. Hard. Let's just hope he doesn't end up on the ground...

Cover by @She Said Poptarts

Characters

Ashton Irwin

Vanessa's older brother(loves making it known). 18. Luke's best friend.

Calum Hood and Mikey Clifford

Best friends with Ashton. 17 & 18. Beginning to let Luke inside their circle.

Heather Chaplin

18. Secretly dating Ashton. Vanessa's best friend.

Luke Hemmings

Likes Vanessa. 17. Wants Vanessa to break up with Ryan.

Ryan Richmond

Vanessa's current boyfriend. 18. Ashton disapproves.

Vanessa Irwin

Ashton's younger sister. 17. A badass at times, but super sweet.

Chapters

Comments

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5/23/15

@Calum Netflix and Pizza
Aww, thanks love. I hope I do too. Love you name by the way.

Aussie Mouse. @ 5SecondsOfSummerFanfiction.com
5/19/15

So I just spent 2 and a half hours reading this story. And I love it. Great job ;) I hope you get out of ur writer funk.

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5/19/15

@Lucy Hemmings
I really want you to continue your story but you could use a little tweaking. Me personally, I prefer if you space out your paragraphs and dialogue because it just makes it easier to read and it flows better.

Put more details! The more details the better. Try to connect with not only your readers but with your character because you character's are their own people with minds of their owns. Let the words flow through you and on to the keyboard. Details also makes your chapters longer.

Just look over simple punctuation and grammar errors. Also be sure to note who's POV it is at the top of the page if you want to continue switching POV's.

Other than that, you're pretty solid. I'm sorry if I come out mean. I don't mean to be! I promise. But you have so much potential to be a great writer!

Hakuna Matata,
Vannessa

Aussie Mouse. @ 5SecondsOfSummerFanfiction.com
5/18/15

Hi I love this story its really cool, also I have just written my very first fanfic called Why now? Why today? its a Luke Hemmings fanfic and I would love for u to check it out.