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My Best Friend's Sister

Blackmail

Ashton's POV
Here I am again. Heather and I. In the supply closet. Again. I was putting my pants back on and, again, Heather was nagging me to tell Vanessa.

"Why are you not going to tell her?" She yelled but whispered at the same time.

"Because she's going through a tough time right now with Ryan," she paused when I said that.

"I didn't know. I'm sorry," she said bring her voice down.

"You would if you ever called her or stopped by instead of nagging me all the time," I said. She didn't even try to protest because she knows I'm right.

We walked out the supply closet together and made sure no one was coming through the hall. "I'm sorry for nagging at you," Heather said with her head down.

I tilted her chin up, "Its fine. I really should tell her about us. And I will. This weekend. I promise," I said and we kissed, which turned into a makeout session.

"Well, well, well," I knew whose voice that belonged to. Heather and I broke our kiss to look at Ryan. "I'm guessing Vanessa doesn't know about you two from the conversation I heard," He said with a beaten face. What happened to him?

"I swear to God, if you tell her-" I started.

"You're going to do what?" He questioned me. "Because as far as I know Vanessa is going to hate you when you tell her."

"What do you want?" I asked through my clenched teeth.

"I want you to convince Vanessa to take me back," he said confidently.

"Why should I?" I asked him.

"Because if you don't, the video of you two in the supply closet is going on YouTube and she can find out that way," my eyes expanded. "Yeah, I've known about this for quite sometime now."

"Okay say if I get you and Vanessa to stop fighting and actually talk to you," I began, "How do we know that you're not going to just post it up anyway?"

"You're not as dumb as I thought you were, Irwin," And I'm going to admit it, I was offended by that. "But I keep my promises. Just ask Vanessa."

I started to lunge at him but Heather pulled me back and he just laughed. "Just do it and the video goes away," He said as he walked off down the hallway.

Notes

Just a teaser of what's to come...

Anyway I'd like to thank for the readers for putting this story on page 4 of the popular list. Thanks so much!

Oh and I would like to hear what you guys think about this chapter! Comment!

Also read No Control by willyouharryme and Opposite Worlds by directioner7up! They're both really good fanfics to read!

By the way, I'm giving people shoutouts who's books I read so yeah... Anyways...

Hakuna Matata,
Nessy

Comments

@Calum Netflix and Pizza
Aww, thanks love. I hope I do too. Love you name by the way.

So I just spent 2 and a half hours reading this story. And I love it. Great job ;) I hope you get out of ur writer funk.

@Lucy Hemmings
I really want you to continue your story but you could use a little tweaking. Me personally, I prefer if you space out your paragraphs and dialogue because it just makes it easier to read and it flows better.

Put more details! The more details the better. Try to connect with not only your readers but with your character because you character's are their own people with minds of their owns. Let the words flow through you and on to the keyboard. Details also makes your chapters longer.

Just look over simple punctuation and grammar errors. Also be sure to note who's POV it is at the top of the page if you want to continue switching POV's.

Other than that, you're pretty solid. I'm sorry if I come out mean. I don't mean to be! I promise. But you have so much potential to be a great writer!

Hakuna Matata,
Vannessa

Hi I love this story its really cool, also I have just written my very first fanfic called Why now? Why today? its a Luke Hemmings fanfic and I would love for u to check it out.