My Best Friend's Sister - Comments

update now

@Calum Netflix and Pizza
Aww, thanks love. I hope I do too. Love you name by the way.

So I just spent 2 and a half hours reading this story. And I love it. Great job ;) I hope you get out of ur writer funk.

@Lucy Hemmings
I really want you to continue your story but you could use a little tweaking. Me personally, I prefer if you space out your paragraphs and dialogue because it just makes it easier to read and it flows better.

Put more details! The more details the better. Try to connect with not only your readers but with your character because you character's are their own people with minds of their owns. Let the words flow through you and on to the keyboard. Details also makes your chapters longer.

Just look over simple punctuation and grammar errors. Also be sure to note who's POV it is at the top of the page if you want to continue switching POV's.

Other than that, you're pretty solid. I'm sorry if I come out mean. I don't mean to be! I promise. But you have so much potential to be a great writer!

Hakuna Matata,
Vannessa

Hi I love this story its really cool, also I have just written my very first fanfic called Why now? Why today? its a Luke Hemmings fanfic and I would love for u to check it out.

@Dani Hemmings
Yeah, I know its you but I'll try to update twice tomorrow.

Update more plz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! really good tho I am the same as hemmingsgirl2001 just changed my name and prefile

Update more plz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! really good tho I am the same as hemmingsgirl2001 just changed my name and prefile

I LOVE THIS STORY! CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE!! :D

best chaps ever...cant wait for new ones

@CactusPlush
Aw thank you! I find it funny because when I read it over, I don't know. I just don't feel anything but you guys like it! I've never heard addicting before though. I love you too and keep reading and commenting!

I'm pretty new, but i read every chapter of this story because its so good and addicting!! <3 Love this story and love you so thanks!!

@#81675
Awww, I love you too! I'll try to update faster, its just I have other stories to work on too.

I love youuuuu :* and this story is amazing gust update faster pleaseeee:*<3

@hemmingsgirl2001
I try lol

YES NEW CHAPTER.......I WAS WAITING FOR THIS MOMENT........THANK YOU......YOU THE BEST

@amythyst19 You're welcome!

Thx the update is really good!

@amythyst19
This weekend darling.

When's the next update