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My Best Friend's Sister

Surprise

Vanessa's POV
I walked out of class in a hurry to get the day over with. I was walking to Art studio until someone grabbed my arm. Luke. Shit. He's suppose to walk with me.

"You walk really really fast," he said out of breath and I smiled and rolled my eyes some more.

"I'm sorry. I was just..." I sighed, trailing off and we began walking at a slow normal pace to our next class.

"So," he scratched his head and looked down to the floor, "I don't want to ask if its going to make you mad or anything."

"What is it?" I said looking back at him in those crystal blue eyes.

"Is there something wrong? Because you were like sad yesterday, you're kinda bipolar today," I looked down. "You don't have to tell me."

"No," I say looking back up stopping a few feet from the studio. "Its about Ryan."

"What about him?" He asks with concern.

"I.. I think he's cheating on me," I spit out then without warning he embraces me in an hug and I hug him back. God, does he smell good.

"I'm sorry," he says through my hair. He breaks the hug. "Are-" He was gone in a blur. Tackled and on the ground.

Ryan's POV
I came around the corner and just in time to see my dark brunette girlfriend coming out of class. I just have to talk to her.

I weave through people walking in the hallway, keeping my eyes on her. But then I see her and this blonde guy stopping over by the lockers. She says something and he just immediately hugs her.

Now I'm fucking furious. The shit must not know that she's still mine. He lets her go and that's when I tackle him to the ground and started punching the shit out of him.

Vanessa's POV
Its Ryan. I should've known it but it took me by surprise. He was on top of Luke and started to repeatedly punch him. I snapped out of my zone and tried to pry Ryan off.

"Ryan, get off!" I was pulling him behind his back but he wouldn't budge. Then he pushed me hard into the lockers.

"Stay back!" He looked at me for a split second before he and Luke switched positions.

Luke got on top and started punching Ryan just as hard. "C'mon Luke," I pleaded. "Please." But as soon as Luke stopped, Ryan took it to an advantage and hit him square in the nose.

Luke fell backwards and I caught him and laid him down on the floor. He lifted his hand from his nose and it was covered in blood. I looked back at Ryan who was getting back up.

I got up from Luke's side and went to Ryan. He looked at me all lovey dovey and I was disgusted. I slapped him. His head turned.

"We're over," I said tears brimming my eyes. I went back over to Luke's side and he was still bleeding.

Just then, an administrator grabbed all three of us and dragged us to the office.

I shouldn't have came today.

Notes

Oooooo....

I know most of the readers were just wait for the day to come when Vanessa just breaks up with Ryan.

So now that it happened what do you guys think? Did you like it? Did you hate it? Are you speechless? Comment, comment, comment, comment! And guys don't forget to vote its really important!

I also want to thank all the readers who subscribed, commented, voted, and all that good stuff. Without you guys, I would have gave up after the first chapter but I'm glad to see all loyal fans. So thank you, thank you, thank you!

Next update is probably tomorrow. I don't know. I'm undecided about that. If you still don't know, I'm the author of Before and YouTube Famous, you're probably the ones that's not reading this author's note. So sucks for you because you're missing out on 2 other awesome stories.

And I run Imagines! Yes, Imagines! 5SOS and One Direction! If you want one just click my name and you'll be sure to find it.

Lastly, I want to talk about Zayn. Its still a big topic in the Directioner world and its just... like no words. I understand why he did what he did but you guys can't be selfish. He was going on as someone he was not and he didn't like it, that's why he left. These 5 wonderful guys tell you to be you, so please have some respect and decency for his decision. You guys say you want them to be happy, so let Zayn have his happiness. He isn't turning his back on the 4 other lads and they aren't turning their backs on him. Lets all do the same and support Zayn. All good things come to an end, but we still have the memories to keep forever.

Hakuna Matata my friends because the sun will rise tomorrow,
Vanessa

Comments

@Calum Netflix and Pizza
Aww, thanks love. I hope I do too. Love you name by the way.

So I just spent 2 and a half hours reading this story. And I love it. Great job ;) I hope you get out of ur writer funk.

@Lucy Hemmings
I really want you to continue your story but you could use a little tweaking. Me personally, I prefer if you space out your paragraphs and dialogue because it just makes it easier to read and it flows better.

Put more details! The more details the better. Try to connect with not only your readers but with your character because you character's are their own people with minds of their owns. Let the words flow through you and on to the keyboard. Details also makes your chapters longer.

Just look over simple punctuation and grammar errors. Also be sure to note who's POV it is at the top of the page if you want to continue switching POV's.

Other than that, you're pretty solid. I'm sorry if I come out mean. I don't mean to be! I promise. But you have so much potential to be a great writer!

Hakuna Matata,
Vannessa

Hi I love this story its really cool, also I have just written my very first fanfic called Why now? Why today? its a Luke Hemmings fanfic and I would love for u to check it out.