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My Best Friend's Sister

Sorry's Not Enough

Ryan's POV
I feel terrible. Her suspicion of me cheating has probably escalated over night and there won't be any way to bring her back down.

I know, I know. I sound like a fucking hypocrite but I was thinking this morning. I only want Jaclyn for the sex but I want Vanessa because she makes me happy. She doesn't change for me and I accept her just the way she is.

I have to make it up to her some kind of way and not by sex. But how? Her asshole brother won't let me anywhere near her and he'll probably be escorting her to all her classes. I pull my phone out and begin to text Vanessa, hiding my phone under the desk and occasionally looking up to see if the teacher's looking.

To Nessy<3:
Hey... Can we talk???

From Nessy<3:
Now u want 2 talk 2 someone?

To Nessy<3:
Yes, and preferably u.

From Nessy<3:
Well, I'm busy.

To Nessy<3:
Doing wat?

From Nessy<3:
Learning.

To Nessy<3:
Can we talk @ lunch???

From Nessy<3:
No.

To Nessy<3:
Y not???

From Nessy<3:
Cause I don't want 2 talk 2 u!

To Nessy<3:
Babe, look I'm sorry. Let me make it up 2 u. Let me take u out 2nite.

From Nessy<3:
1) Not ur babe so stop calling me that 2) No u can't take me out what makes u think that I'm actually going 2 have a decent convo with u out in public w/o us arguing abt this? Like really? This has happened 3 times already Ryan! Ur just feeding my suspicion that u really r cheating!

To Nessy<3:
Vanessa...

From Nessy<3:
What?

To Nessy<3:
I love u 2 much 2 hurt u, I want u 2 know that because I really do mean it and I really want to make it up 2 u. And if u want 2 talk abt this we can, I'm not running away from not talking abt it. I know it probably won't mean much to you but, Vanessa baby, I'm sooo sorry. Plz forgive me.

From Nessy<3:
Sorry's not enough. Bye Ryan.

I locked my phone and payed attention to the teacher but what Vanessa said was still on my mind: Sorry's not enough.

Vanessa's POV
I locked my phone and slide it in my back pocket. He really thought I was going to forgive him that easily. He's going to have to beg for my forgiveness and its not going to be easy.

Luke's POV
I saw Vanessa finally lock her phone and put it in her pocket after a series of text but after she was done, she had her face in full bitch mode. Her eyes were stone cold, jaws locked in so you can see her high cheekbones that were stuck out even more. Her leg was shaking, like she's going to go ape shit on the next person who breathes around her.

I wonder if this has something that triggered what happened last night but she's not sad, she's pissed. I better not say anything.

Notes

Hey guys!

So a few things need to be said...

  1. If you don't know it by now, I'm the writer of Before, Youtube Famous, and 5SOS & 1D Imagines. Go check those out please! I promise you won't be disappointed.
  2. Comments would be good every now and then to tell me what you think. So yeah.
  3. DID YOU KNOW THERE'S AN AUSTIN MAHONE FANFICTION WEBSITE??? Its like when you find money in your coat pocket and you totally forgot it was in there from last Winter and you instantly become $5 richer. But it's not doing too well, guys. It's rough. People hardly update or they give up and don't continue the stories. It just sucks. I know that there are some Mahomies out there just dying to have their own fanfic website, well this your chance! Its austinmahonefanfiction.com. One more time, its austinmahonefanfiction.com
  4. Ignore the 5, 6, 1, and 2... Don't know how to turn off this thingy... Don't laugh because I know you are...

Comments

@Calum Netflix and Pizza
Aww, thanks love. I hope I do too. Love you name by the way.

So I just spent 2 and a half hours reading this story. And I love it. Great job ;) I hope you get out of ur writer funk.

@Lucy Hemmings
I really want you to continue your story but you could use a little tweaking. Me personally, I prefer if you space out your paragraphs and dialogue because it just makes it easier to read and it flows better.

Put more details! The more details the better. Try to connect with not only your readers but with your character because you character's are their own people with minds of their owns. Let the words flow through you and on to the keyboard. Details also makes your chapters longer.

Just look over simple punctuation and grammar errors. Also be sure to note who's POV it is at the top of the page if you want to continue switching POV's.

Other than that, you're pretty solid. I'm sorry if I come out mean. I don't mean to be! I promise. But you have so much potential to be a great writer!

Hakuna Matata,
Vannessa

Hi I love this story its really cool, also I have just written my very first fanfic called Why now? Why today? its a Luke Hemmings fanfic and I would love for u to check it out.