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My Best Friend's Sister

Secrets

Ashton’s POV
Heather and I are still in the supply closet, putting on our clothes from our… I don't know what to call this. A booty call maybe? I don't know but what I do know is that it’s amazing.

“Have you told her yet?” Heather asked slipping on and buttoning up her pants.

“Told who what?” I was playing dumb. She wanted to know if I told my sister about us hooking up.

“Don't play dumb,” she said slipping back on her shirt, “Have you told Vanessa about us or whatever this is?”

“No,” I said fumbling with the button on my skinnies.

“Then when will you?” Heather pressured.

“When it’s the right time and she doesn't have anything that can potentially cause severe injuries,” I said putting my shirt back on.

“If you don’t tell her know, sooner or later she'll figure it out or someone else could find out and tell her.” Now she’s annoyed.

I go over to her and snake my arms around her waist while her arms are crossed on her chest. “I’ll tell her when it’s time for her to know.” She pushed me away and began for the door until I tugged at her hand.

“If you don’t tell her soon, she’s going to be heartbroken,” She snatched her hand away from my grasp and exited.

I love my sister and I would never hurt her but some secrets have to be left in the dark.

Luke’s POV
I looked around the cafeteria looking for a place to sit and I saw these two dudes by wall all by themselves. So I walked up to the table.

“Can I sit here?” I asked and they looked at each other and shrugged their shoulders. I sat down immediately.

“You new here?” asked the boy with brown hair and fair skin.

“Yeah,” I said peeling my banana.

“I’m Calum, but you can call me Cal,” He said.

“And I’m Michael, but you can call me Mikey,” said the boy who obviously had a hard time choosing his favorite color, in which I am calling Mikey.

“What’s your name?” asked Calum.

“Luke,” I said swallowing my banana.

“Where you come from Luke?” Mikey asked me.

“Sydney,” I replied back.

“Oh, nice,” Mikey said back.

“How are you liking Camberwell so far?” Calum asked. “Any girls you see fit?”

“It’s alright and… yeah. You can say so,” I smiled thinking about Vanessa.

“Who? You know her name?” Mikey asks.

“I don’t know,” I lied. I don’t know why I just did that.

“Oh,” they both said together.

“So, Luke, you play guitar, right?” Mikey asked. I gave him a ‘how’d you know' look. “The blisters on your fingers.” That’s a dead give away.

“Maybe you can jam out with us,” Calum said. Mikey nodding in agreement.

“Yeah and maybe Ash-” Mikey began to say.

“‘Maybe Ash’ what?” They guy, who I’m expecting is ‘Ash’, sat down at the table with us.

“I was just saying that maybe our new pal could play with us,” Cal said. I nearly laughed.

“Don’t say ‘play with us’. Ever again. Ever,” ‘Ash’ said with a serious face but he was trying not
to laugh.

“Okay. Rephrase: I was just saying that maybe our new pal could rock out with us,” Cal said
emphasising ‘rock out with us’.

“Better,” ‘Ash’ said, “I’m Ashton by the way.”

“Luke,” I said.

“I think we’re going to be great friends Luke,” Ashton said.

And just like that, I found my group, my friends.

Vanessa’s POV
Ryan and I are just out in the hallway talking. I’m leaning against a wall and he has his hands wrapped around my waist.

“So are we still on for movies at my place tonight?” I said looking into his big green eyes.
Then a look shot through his face instantly.

“I’m sorry, I gotta go to this recital for my sister tonight,” He said, kinda disappointed in himself that he can’t come hang out with me.

“There’s always tomorrow and the next day-” Then he joined in with me.

“And the next day and the next day,” we said in unison and laughed.

“I don’t know how you’re so optimistic,” HIs eyes darting from my lips to my eyes then back to my lips.

“It’ because I have you,” That cheeky smile came across his face and he kissed me hard then backed off. “But it’s a shame really,” said playing with the buttons of his shirt.

“Why?” He asked curiously.

“Because I just got this really cute black laced bra and thong and now you won’t get to see it,” I pouted and made my eyes bigger.

“Oh really?” I nodded. “Then that is a shame because if I was coming over, it wouldn't stay on for too long,” he said in my ear oh so seductively and I bit my bottom lip. “Stop being such a tease,” Ryan said.

“You think this is teasing?” I pulled him by his shirt and whispered into his ear, “You haven’t seen nothing yet.” Just then the bell had rung signifying that lunch is over. I walked away from Ryan and didn’t look back, making sure to switch my ass when I walked.

“Tease!” He called out and I looked back and did a seductive ass smile and blowed him a kiss. He pretended to catch it and held it to his heart.

I left and went back to the last class of the day.

Notes

ooo, chapter 3... I think...
Tell me how you like it so far!

P.S. Going to see 5SOS September 9 2015 at the PNC Music Pavillion in Charlotte, NC! Row 3!!!

Yea, be jelly.

Comments

@Calum Netflix and Pizza
Aww, thanks love. I hope I do too. Love you name by the way.

So I just spent 2 and a half hours reading this story. And I love it. Great job ;) I hope you get out of ur writer funk.

@Lucy Hemmings
I really want you to continue your story but you could use a little tweaking. Me personally, I prefer if you space out your paragraphs and dialogue because it just makes it easier to read and it flows better.

Put more details! The more details the better. Try to connect with not only your readers but with your character because you character's are their own people with minds of their owns. Let the words flow through you and on to the keyboard. Details also makes your chapters longer.

Just look over simple punctuation and grammar errors. Also be sure to note who's POV it is at the top of the page if you want to continue switching POV's.

Other than that, you're pretty solid. I'm sorry if I come out mean. I don't mean to be! I promise. But you have so much potential to be a great writer!

Hakuna Matata,
Vannessa

Hi I love this story its really cool, also I have just written my very first fanfic called Why now? Why today? its a Luke Hemmings fanfic and I would love for u to check it out.