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My Best Friend's Sister

We're Brother And Sister!

Vanessa's POV
As I walk down the hallways to get out of this hell hole, Ashton came up to me and kissed my cheek. He's never really done that before so I looked at him strangely.

"What?" He asked, arm around my shoulder.

"You've never done that before," I said, kinda scared.

"I can't show affection to my lil sis?" He said. He wants something. Something important.

"What is that you want?" I asked him, stopping at my car. I get annoyed about him calling me little. I am 5'5 and a 1/2 to be exact. And that is normal height I might add.

"Who said I wanted anything?" He furrowed his brows.

"Because you don't kiss me on the cheek unless you want something," I said crossing my arms and leaning against my car door. "Now what do you want?"

"Nothing!" He says with his arms flailing everywhere. Ashton's weird but not this 'kiss on your sister' weird.

"Okay Ash," I begin to get inside my car and drive off looking at Ashton wave to me in the rear view mirror. Idiot. I live with you!

But that's what I get for having a weird, curly haired, freak as my brother.

Luke's POV
I tried catching up to her again but she left out of there in a flash. Like she had somewhere so important to be on a Wednesday.

I rushed into the hallway filled with people rushing out to get home and I saw her black pretty head above them all.

I pushed through people and kinda came close to reaching out and grabbing her shoulder.

Until I saw Ashton kiss her on her cheek and his arm around her shoulders. I stopped walking, astonished.

Is she? Is she with two guys at the same time, at the same school? How doesn't this get around?

I have to tell Ashton.

Ryan's POV
I left out the weight room going out to find Vanessa, when I got a text.

From Jaclyn:
we still on 4 2nite @ ur place?

I smiled at the text and I texted back.

To Jaclyn:
wouldnt miss it

Vanessa's POV
I unlocked the door and walked inside my house.

"Mom?! Dad?!" No answer, of course. They're never home.

They're probably out at work doing whatever they do, leaving me and Ashton home most of the time. The only time we see them is on the weekends and even then they're up in their office or study working on the computer or on the phone for work.

It's been that way for years. Since I was 5, it was just me and Ashton. Ashton looking after me and feeding me when I little. We use to sit at the dinner table on Fridays when they were out working and tell our memories of when we did things as a family.

Like the first time I went to the beach and got scared because I thought the water was going to sweep me away but Dad took my hand and walked to the shore letting the water tickle my feet. He would inch closer until we were about waist deep in the water. And he told me, "You won't get swept away." That's funny because he got swept away from me.


I walked up to my bedroom and flopped on the bed, looking up at my galaxy painted ceiling.

I pulled my phone out and started to text Ryan.

To Ryan<3:
I miss you already... :(

I waited for him to respond. He usually responds in seconds.

Maybe he has his phone off because of the recital.

Luke's POV
I'm in the student parking area waiting on my brother to pick me up. I swear, if it's possible, he would be late to his own funeral. No kidding.

Then a black car pulled up to the bench I'm sitting on and began to roll down the passenger side window. It's Ashton.

"Wanna ride?" He asked.

"Yeah," I said.

"Get in!" I got up, opened the passenger side door and got in. I looked behind me and realized that Calum and Mikey were in the back.

"Hey Luke," they said in unison.

"Hey mates," I said.

"Let's go!" Ashton yelled as he abruptly slammed on the gas.

Vanessa's POV
In a matter of minutes, Ashton's car came in roaring. He really needs to get something done with that heap of rubble.

I heard the door open downstairs and he called out.

"I'm home!" He yelled.

Ashton's POV
"I'm home!" I yelled, knowing that Vanessa was upstairs and pretty much the only one in the house.

"Hey Ash?" Luke says nervously.

"Yeah?" I said looking back at him.

"You know that girl you kissed when school was over?" He said hands in his pockets clearly nervous.

I already knew what this would lead to. He wanted to go out with my sister because she's hot. Hell, I'll admit it. My sister is hot but I don't want random guys going up to her for random sex.

"Yeah, what about her?" I said crossing my arms against my chest waiting for the words: "I like" and "date" in the same sentence.

"She's cheating on you," he said and I bursted out laughing. He said it so serious that it made it seem like he was from one of those cheesy romantic movies. "Why are you laughing?"

"Just-just wait right there mate," I said while uncontrollably laughing. I went upstairs and knocked on Vanessa's bedroom door.

"Enter," said through the door. I found her on her bed laying down, looking on her phone.

"Come downstairs," I said still laughing.

"Why?" she asked looking at me weirdly.

"Just come on," She got up off her bed and I went downstairs. Luke was still at the bottom of the stairs.

"Is this who you're talking about?" I gestured to Vanessa who came down the stairs as almost on cue.

"Yeah," Luke said confused.

"Okay two questions: Why is blondie over here in our home and what's so funny?" She asked,

"He thinks that we're together and that your cheating on me!" She bursted out laughing and so did I.

"I don't get it," Luke said dumbfoundedly.

Vanessa was able to regain her composure first, "We're brother and sister!" And then it went away ending in laughs while Luke's mouth was hung out.

Vanessa's POV
"I'm s-sorry," he stuttered.

"Okay," Ashton and I are done laughing. For now. "Is this the guy you're talking about earlier?"

"Yeah, you know him?" Ashton asked.

"Yeah, we have art and psychology together," I say.

"Not to forget World Lit," he mumbled.

"Wow," Ashton said. "Well, Vanessa that's Luke. Luke, Vanessa." Ashton then walked off, possible going into the garage.

"Don't tell me you see the resemblance now," I said.

Notes

Comments

@Calum Netflix and Pizza
Aww, thanks love. I hope I do too. Love you name by the way.

So I just spent 2 and a half hours reading this story. And I love it. Great job ;) I hope you get out of ur writer funk.

@Lucy Hemmings
I really want you to continue your story but you could use a little tweaking. Me personally, I prefer if you space out your paragraphs and dialogue because it just makes it easier to read and it flows better.

Put more details! The more details the better. Try to connect with not only your readers but with your character because you character's are their own people with minds of their owns. Let the words flow through you and on to the keyboard. Details also makes your chapters longer.

Just look over simple punctuation and grammar errors. Also be sure to note who's POV it is at the top of the page if you want to continue switching POV's.

Other than that, you're pretty solid. I'm sorry if I come out mean. I don't mean to be! I promise. But you have so much potential to be a great writer!

Hakuna Matata,
Vannessa

Hi I love this story its really cool, also I have just written my very first fanfic called Why now? Why today? its a Luke Hemmings fanfic and I would love for u to check it out.