Fanfiction Help

This was an idea I had based off of some of the Fanfic 101/Story Review posts. These are some topics that I've learned about through my creative writing study that have helped me improve and can probably help you as well. If there's something you'd like me to post about, comment and I'll do my best to cover it/answer your questions.

If you would like a review, feel free to ask. I warn you now, I'm very harsh and honest. I won't bullshit you and you won't get a ten unless you earn it. I'm not here to hurt your feelings, but to help you to figure out what to improve on. Constructive criticism is a good thing! Not meant to be confused with bashing.

To get a review:
Comment/message me with the following:
-Name of story (preferably with the link)
-Number of chapters (or number of chapters you would like me to review)
-If you have a coauthor, are they okay with my reviewing?
-Complete/Incomplete
-Would you like the review private or public? I'm more then willing to do either (I understand someone not wanting the review to be posted for the world to see).

If your story is longer than others, it will take longer. I won't go in order if your story is 104 chapters and another persons is only 5, I'll probably review theirs first. Be patient, please!

if you ask for a normal, public review and want me to take it down, I'm more than happy to, just ask. But if you ask for a private review then decide I gave you a 'high enough rating' and ask me to post it, I won't. It's a gamble people. Decide.


I'm aware I'm not the first person to make a feed like this. My credit is TOTALLY going to ThatRandomUnicorn/ThatRebelGirl because I'm obsessed with her writing/reviewing/posting/everything. But I figured hey, why not post my thoughts on stuff that she hasn't.

1. Dialogue punctuation/Dialogue mechanics

2. Review bandwagon.

3. Abused: Lee_Loves_Looouiiss

   Review

4. The Outsiders: Niall_Is_Damn_Sexy

   Review

5. Finding Love: Harry_Louis_Niall_Liam_Zayn

   Review

6. Love At First Type: ThatRebelGirl/ThatRandomUnicorn

   Review

7. Best Day of Our Lives!!: Harry_Louis_Niall_Liam_Zayn

   Review

8. Wasting all these tears on you: Shelby

   Review

9. The Fire In His Eyes: ZaynLove

   Review

10. Live While We're Young: taptomusic

    Review

11. The Girl Who Waited: taptomusic

    Review

12. The Devil's Choice: Kay_Baby

    Review

13. How To Write Smut

    my how-to-guide on writing dirty fanficiton!

14. The Devil In Disguise: SNOW

    Review

15. Less Than Zero: pippalove

    Review

16. A New Direction: Kay_Baby, DestroyShelbeyy, lyrics.tell.my.story, TheRockerOfTheParty, Sydney.wildchild

    Review

17. Stay With Me: Irish Gal

    Review

18. Shattered Walls: Paynefullyfalling

    Review

19. Secrets We're Hiding: WeyHeyItsTigerlily

    Review

20. Story Reviewer Rant :)

21. When You Let Your Heart Win: emilyloren94

    review

22. -D U R B A N . S K I E S - : Clastilie

    Review

23. Directioner Games: FutureMrsPayne

    Review

24. Main Characters and how most peoples completely and utterly suck