Fanfiction Help - Comments

Name of story: Take My Heart
Number of chapters: Only two but third might be uploaded but the time you see this.
Complete/Incomplete: Incomplete
Would you like the review private or public? Private please (I'm nervous!)
Thank you so much! x

Name of story: Gone http://www.onedirectionfanfiction.org/Story/39122/Gone/
Number of chapters: Currently working on chapter thirty-two but if my story sucks you can stop reading/reviewing when you get bored because I update regularly and by the time you see this I might be up to chapter forty or something :)
If you have a coauthor, are they okay with my reviewing? I have a co-author listed but she is my best friend who edits my chapters sometimes/wants easy access because she's the reader and I'm the writer.
Complete/Incomplete: Incomplete
Would you like the review private or public? Public #yolo
Thank you :) x

Can you please review Misfit for me?

Can you pweease review I Will Kill? I had recently made it, and there is only one chapter.

@pippalove
awe I'm glad it helped you a bit! Thanks so much! - elle x

@FutureMrsPayne
no problem! just remember that this is YOUR writing and YOU are in charge of it. Make it what you want and i promise you'll do much better!

Thanks for being honest... all the ideas are the people who signed up, so shelbey told me to make her paprents sign her up, it wasnt really my decision

Can you please review my story Faded Notes it's got 3 chapters and it's most definetly not finished. No co author. THANK YOU SO MUCH! Have a great day! :)

Thank you so much for that last chapter. I am stuck in a complete rut critizing every word I type and it's given me a breather opportunity to remind myself to just relax and bring it back down to the basics. You may not have been intending that but a huge, huge thank you xx

@RealityRuinedMyLife

thanks so much :)

Can you review all my chapters? I just put 5 because that's how many there are, but I may update before you review. I love your reviews by the way! Thanks

Lila

@Zaynlove
absolutely! I'm not going to give you a number rating (if that's okay with you) but I'd love to see what you've done with it :)

I love how you give advice on how to fix a story instead of criticizing every single mistake someone has made. :)

I was wondering if you could review my story? Its called, Sweet Disaster. Public is fine with me and all of my chapters. Thank you!

Name of story: The Fire in His Eyes
-Number of chapters: all
-Incomplete
-public
(I know you have already given me a review but I only had like 3 or 4 chapters when you did it. I was wondering if you could tell me how I've been doing?)

Living with the Devil (http://www.onedirectionfanfiction.org/Story/34787/Living-with-the-Devil/)
5
No co-author
incomplete
public

Thanks!

@FutureMrsPayne
your review is up :)

@Clastilie
feel free to ask me to re-review it once your plot is more visible in the story! :)

Thank you so much! Your feedback is wonderful, I'll try my best with the dialog! :)

I know you're probably busy, but whenever you can, please review my story :) sorry to be needy :P

@RealityRuinedMyLife
Thank you so much