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Can you review mine?? It's called "Sleeping at Last". Thank you, lovely! XOXO

Can you review Broken? ;)

Please can you review my story?

Its called The Devil In Disguise
http://www.onedirectionfanfiction.org/Story/27081/The-Devil-In-Disguise-Marcel-Harry-Fanfic/
So far there is 23 chapters but that might change
Its incomplete
You can review it public please?

@RealityRuinedMyLife
Sure! But Wolf and TDC are both Paranormal so if you don't read those types of stories, it'll be fine if you just did A New Direction.

@Kay_Baby
I can do all three :) it just may take a teensy bit longer! So if you're willing to wait a little, I'm happy to do it! :)

@RealityRuinedMyLife
Or A New Direction instead. Public is still okay :)

@ThatRebelGirl
your review is up!

Please review The Devil's Choice and Wolf. All if you could, they aren't all that long... and a public review is just fine :)

Please review Live While We're Young and The Girl Who Waited. Thanks! ~Belle~

@ThatRebelGirl
ahhh yay alright!

I guess it's my turn for a review! Haha. I just magically found this page and I was literally like: Now I have to get a review because you're doing them. Feel free to be as critical as you possibly can; I could really use the criticism.

Love At First Type
There are 15 chapters, but feel free to stop sooner.
The coauthor is really just my other account because I'm weird and have two accounts.
Incomplete.
Public.

@Niall_Is_Damn_Sexy
I don't really have a number in my head but whenever you introduce all of the characters and the storyline is obvious, you know? just let me know :)

Can you do my story? I only have one story

Thanks for the review. And I see your point on the burning. To me it made sense that after they raid they burn. And they take stuff from the raid that they don't need and pawn it. Also, I will work on the punctuation, and how many chapters does it need to be before you can re-review and give me a number rating? I'm glad you liked it and I noticed that guys seemed tougher than girls and I wanted to show that girls can be tough too. :)

1.)Finding Love. 2.)Best Day of Our Lives!!
1.)4 chapters. 2.)30 chapters
1.)Don't have any. 2.)Don't have any
1.)Incomplete 2.)Incomplete
1.)Public 2.)Public

Please and Thanks. :)

@Lee_Loves_Looouiiss



@Niall_Is_Damn_Sexy
your reviews are up!

Name of Story: Abused
Number of chapters: Just maybe review the first ten?
Co-author: I don't have any.
Completed?: In complete
Private/Public: Public

@Lee_Loves_Looouiiss
sure just fill out the little form thingy above and i'd be happy to :)