Fanfiction Help - Comments, page 2

@zaynisthebestest
awe thank you (again :))! Yes I can!

Hey, any chance you could review my story Perfect Act?


I love your story's I'm hooked on them and your like a totally BRILLIAM writer

@ThatRebelUnicorn
My mom would say "if you don't have anything nice to say, come here and we'll talk about stupid people together"

my mom is awesome

@ThatRebelUnicorn
my mom would say 'if you don't have anything nice to say, come sit next to me because I don't either lolol

That last chapter tho. I've been wanting to say something forever ago about that, but I didn't know how to put it in a nice enough way. My mom always told me, "If you don't have anything nice to say... you better just keep your mouth shut because you never say anything nice." Gotta love my mom...

@FutureMrsPayne
@Clastilie
sure :)

@Paynefullyfalling
nooo don't worry about it! I don't mind if you use what I wrote at all and when you revise it i'll definitely re-review it just let me know :)

Can I have a review for my story - D U R B A N . S K I E S - A Larry Stylinson Fanfiction - http://www.onedirectionfanfiction.org/Story/32327/-D-U-R-B-A-N-S-K-I-E-S-A-Larry-Stylinson-Fanfiction/
- one, but if you need more I can message you what I have of chapter two
- incomplete
-Public

@RealityRuinedMyLife
Thanks wow. Do you mind if I use what you wrote? It was fab. I'm also thinking I'll probably go back and basically rewrite a lot of it. When I'm finished, do you think you could review it again? If not, that's fine. Also, about the spacing. I used a tab instead of a full space, so when I posted it it moved it all to the side. Sorry this is so long haha

Can you review directioner games?

@Paynefullyfalling
i posted you review!

@angel_101
sure love xx

@When_Theres_Pain_Theres_You
Sure! <3

I just made this story, it only has one chapter and it would mean a lot if you reviewed it!

http://www.onedirectionfanfiction.org/Story/32196/Loved-You-Once-Niall-Horan-and-Louis-Tomlinson-Fanfiction/
Is there any chance you can review the first few chapters of my book and let me know if you think it could go anywhere? I have got the story planned out any everything but it it worth it to keep going? Thanks heaps xx
P.S. I don't mind if you don't/can't

@Paynefullyfalling
sure love!

Review mine? It only has five chapters lollll. Shattered Walls

@Irish Gal
no problem! I'm excited to keep reading them and seeing what you decide to do with them :)

thank you! that really helped and I completely agree looking back at my stories. Thanks!

@Irish Gal
sure xx

Could you do Sray With Me?