Fanfiction Help - Comments, page 3

@Kay_Baby
Awe that makes me happy :)

@RealityRuinedMyLife
No problem. I was hooked on INWILL from the first chapter! And thanks :) I appreciate it. Lol

@Kay_Baby
Ahhh that's sososososososo exciting though! Don't be nervous, you'll be great!

And thank you so much! I really appreciate it :)

@RealityRuinedMyLife
I know! I'll be standing in front of the producers for The Voice... I'm so nervous. Good luck! And I'm loving The Wanted Girl and It's Not What It Looks Like.

@Kay_Baby
I'm a cosmetology student with them so I have to sign a contract pretty much pledging my allegiance to their company lol. But I'm not complaining since my mentor is currently working for Ke$ha lol. And omg that's so exciting!!!!!!! :)

@RealityRuinedMyLife
No problem. What's the contract for? And I feel you. I have my audition in 9 days so I'm upping my rehearsals.

@Kay_Baby

Wolf and Embarcadero! I'm going to work on someone elses tomorrow and yours and then I'll do the other either tomorrow or the next day! I have to go sign my contract with Paul Mitchell and I'm not sure how long it'll take so I'll try my best to get both done tomorrow :) Thank you for your patience love <333

@RealityRuinedMyLife
And I also readded Zavier and Roman. You can go look if you'd like. Sydney overloaded the character list with Harry's 13 kids she decided to have.

@RealityRuinedMyLife
Thank you lol and yeah... it's hectic. I have two like that and I'm never doing it again lol anyway, what else have I asked you to review?

@Kay_Baby
hahah I can't imagine a story written by five people totally adding up. But I did love Roksis part, so good job!

Hahah thank you for that! By the way, I write for Roksi, Zayn's daughter, so that was mainly who I was interested in being reviewed so it worked out. Lol and I added Zavier and Roman... I have no clue why they aren't showing up. Sorry about the ages... I'll try and fix it up a bit, just for you lol and I was surprised at Harry's amount of kids too.

@RealityRuinedMyLife
Thanks :) And no prob

@Kay_Baby
ahhh gotcha! Yes your stories are both the next on the list! :)

She changed her username :) She co-wrote Embarcadero w/ me. Another story I asked you to review <3

@SNOW
awe thank you so much!! I seriously appreciate that so much.

@RealityRuinedMyLife
No it's fine, Thank you and your reviews continue to be one of the best review books I've read, most review books I've seen tend to do really short reviews I'm glad yours aren't and are full of ways to improve and detail unlike some other review books I've seen :D

@SNOW
Oh no! I'm sorry that I didn't know I would've taken that into consideration :( well trust me when I say, good for you for writing as well as you do because to have a health issue that makes writing difficult and writing an ENTIRE BOOK anyways is definitely impressive. Like I said in the chapter, you definitely have creative skills.

Thank you for the review though I should of explained to you before hand I'm dyslexic so my grammer can be very crap, like where to put the full stops and comma's in dialogue or general spelling errors. (Just giving you an explanation to probably why my dialogue's not that good)

Though I'm glad you liked the plot twists at least.... :/ :)

@liloweewoah
Awe I'm glad you found it helpful! Thank you for reading it!

This was my first time stumbling upon this writing guide, thanks in part to @Flightless_Bird, & I really have to admit that just this chapter alone has really made me think about the way I write out my stories. I definitely like all the advice that there were given & I plan to use it now as I continue to write my own stories! Thank you so much for creating this story (i guess if it's what you would call it?) or guide/tutorial! :)