Fanfiction Help

(8)Eeek SO I'm already subscribed to this story but I reread it for review purposes. (to make sure I was detailed and fair) I like that Liam is kind of crazy (rightfully so) but you can still tell the real Liam is somewhere inside of him. He's a very complex character but you do a phenomenal job with the description of his problems and personality. I applaud you for that! It's a tough thing to do. My only complaint really is that you sometimes just jump into the middle of an episode and it'd be nice to see it begin from HIS POV. Also, the arson was a little confusing. It almost felt like you had left a chapter out or something. Even if you had started from Liam realizing he was in a burning house, it would have been better. Remember as a reader, we can't fit in the missing pieces that you, as the author, hold in your head! It's hard to try and proof read as a 'reader' when you're the author, I know from experience.

Best advice is to read over it a few times and each time make sure you add at least TWO things. Before you know it, you'll be your very own beta!

I do love your story, very much! Keep on writing my love!

xx, Elle

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