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Sexy Boys

Summary

A girl named Audrey and one of her best friends Lillian are at school Audrey bumped into somone and she fell for him her friend bree showed up what will happen if Audrey and Bree like the same guy will they still be friends or not...

Characters

Audrey

Audrey

she is 17 years old

Bree

Bree

Audrey and Lillian's best friend

Harry

Harry

Is 18 years old

Liam

Liam

Is 18 years old

Lillian

Lillian

Audrey and Brees best friend

Louie

Louie

falls for bree

Niall

Niall

is smoking hot

Zayn

Zayn

is 19 years old

Chapters

Comments

No what happended was Niall and Audrey bummped in to each Other and then Bree was making out with liam
Lillian_Horen Lillian_Horen
11/21/13
I don't want you to be offended, so please take this as constructive cristism.
First of all, your grammar and spelling could use some work. It is a bit difficult to tell what you are saying when there is no proper use of punctuation or misspelled words.
Also, the title doesn't have a thing to do with the story which is a bit misleading. Your title should reflect upon your story.
Also, It's kinda hard to follow your 'storyline.' First Bree bumps into Liam then Audry comes out of nowhere and runs into Niall and then all the sudden they are best friends ?
Whith a little work, this could get better,
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ChloewuvsHarry ChloewuvsHarry
11/21/13
LOL ABBY NO ITS A STORY!!!!!!!!!!
Lillian_Horen Lillian_Horen
11/21/13

fix spelling lol this is abby

Audweeb Audweeb
11/21/13
im working on it luv ya 2
Lillian_Horen Lillian_Horen
11/20/13
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