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Sexy Boys

The Boys

So after Lillian and Bree took the boys outside to the Basketball court and the swimming pool
Audrey and Niall were inside talking

"Who did you know where we were?" Audrey said

"I live acrossed the street I just moved in the boys said they saw you over here." Niall said.

"Oh so whats up?' She said

" I wanted to say i'm sorry about today how I bumped into you and introduce myself, Hi i'm Niall." He said

"Oh don't worrie about it, Hi i'm Audrey."She said as they shake hands

" So you live here?" He asked happily/curiouse

" Haha no my friend Lillian lives here i'm just here a lot.' she said giggling

"Oh haha." he said

"Audrey come here and see this!!" Lillian screamed

Me and Niall ran out back to see that Bree had fell when they were playing basket ball and cut her knee so Harry picked her up and carried her to the kitchen, She was holding on to his chest grinding but in pain but happy that Harry was holding her.

"Bree!" Audrey cried

"What?'she asked while being put down in a chair.

"Did you try to jump and get a dunk?' Audrey asked

"yeah" She said

" I told her not too.' Lillian said

We cleaned her up and put a Banded on her knee then the boys left and Bree and Audrey said at the same time

" I think i'm in love..."

" Oh brother."........ Lillian said










Notes

I hope you liked this chapter its not that good but no one is giveing me ideas so i just typed
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No what happended was Niall and Audrey bummped in to each Other and then Bree was making out with liam
Lillian_Horen Lillian_Horen
11/21/13
I don't want you to be offended, so please take this as constructive cristism.
First of all, your grammar and spelling could use some work. It is a bit difficult to tell what you are saying when there is no proper use of punctuation or misspelled words.
Also, the title doesn't have a thing to do with the story which is a bit misleading. Your title should reflect upon your story.
Also, It's kinda hard to follow your 'storyline.' First Bree bumps into Liam then Audry comes out of nowhere and runs into Niall and then all the sudden they are best friends ?
Whith a little work, this could get better,
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ChloewuvsHarry ChloewuvsHarry
11/21/13
LOL ABBY NO ITS A STORY!!!!!!!!!!
Lillian_Horen Lillian_Horen
11/21/13

fix spelling lol this is abby

Audweeb Audweeb
11/21/13
im working on it luv ya 2
Lillian_Horen Lillian_Horen
11/20/13