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Sexy Boys

I think i'm in love

Lillian's point of view

I woke up and looked at the clock 7:25 We have 30 minutes to get to school

" WAKE UP!!!" I scream so loud

" What is you problem?" Bree and Audrey say confused

"Guys we only have 30 minutes to get to school,We over slept." I said as we all jumped up

We all get up and get dressed brush are teeth put on make and run around getting all are stuff about 5 minutes had past and we were dressed and everything we were turning all then lights off and everything before my mom got home. We all ran to the door and open it and Liam was standing there about to knock

"Hey." He sais confused

"Hey whats up." I said in a flirty voice

" We wanted to know if you guys wanted to drive with Me,Niall and Harry?" he said

"Sure but we have to leave know we have 10 minutes to get there." I said fixing my hair

"Okay well lets go he said grabbing my hand so I follow him.

We followed them to the car and got in when we got to the school I saw Niall take Audrey by the waist...

Notes

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Comments

No what happended was Niall and Audrey bummped in to each Other and then Bree was making out with liam

Lillian_Horen
11/21/13

I don't want you to be offended, so please take this as constructive cristism.
First of all, your grammar and spelling could use some work. It is a bit difficult to tell what you are saying when there is no proper use of punctuation or misspelled words.
Also, the title doesn't have a thing to do with the story which is a bit misleading. Your title should reflect upon your story.
Also, It's kinda hard to follow your 'storyline.' First Bree bumps into Liam then Audry comes out of nowhere and runs into Niall and then all the sudden they are best friends ?
Whith a little work, this could get better,
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