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Sexy Boys

Party

......Audrey's point in view

Why is holding my waist? I don't mind,does he like me? I don't know as I walk away Niall grabs me and says 'your so beautiful." I blush and then walk away

So after class I have my next class with Harry and I sat with him because he was really the only person I know so...

Then we had lunch I found the girls and said "we should throw a party this friday, what do you guys think?

"Yeah we should,at my place." Lillian said an

" Well who is gonna come we barley know anyone?"

The next day I put up flyers about at party at 36 Masion st
from 6-2 and people were talking about then the boys came up to us and said "You guys are throwing a party?"

"yeah,why?" Lillian asked

"Are we allowed to come?" Liam asked with a puppy dog face.

"Yeah of course!" Bree said

So know it was Wensday and we were going shopping after school
And I had become really close with Zayn and he was shopping with us...

Notes

Sorry its so short Please rate.....Hope u liked it....Thx;)

Comments

No what happended was Niall and Audrey bummped in to each Other and then Bree was making out with liam

Lillian_Horen
11/21/13

I don't want you to be offended, so please take this as constructive cristism.
First of all, your grammar and spelling could use some work. It is a bit difficult to tell what you are saying when there is no proper use of punctuation or misspelled words.
Also, the title doesn't have a thing to do with the story which is a bit misleading. Your title should reflect upon your story.
Also, It's kinda hard to follow your 'storyline.' First Bree bumps into Liam then Audry comes out of nowhere and runs into Niall and then all the sudden they are best friends ?
Whith a little work, this could get better,
.