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Sexy Boys

The New School

Lillian and Audrey go to school with each other and there are 5 boys that move from New york and know go to school with them. When Audrey was walk she ran it someone and her stuff fell Lillian helps her pick her stuff up

" Oh... Im sorry here let me help you." Some guy says

" thanks" she says when he hands her books back to her then they made eye Contact

"Hellooooo..Audrey are you there????" Lillian says

"what oh yeah thanks again see ya around."

Audrey had no clue what just happened did she just make eye contact with the new guy?
she could here them says "Hey she was cute." And she turned's around and Niall was looking at and he quickly looks away when he saw her look at him she giggles

"Breeeeee????" Audrey heres Lillian scream.

" Hey guys!!!!" Bree screams

"What are you doing her?" Lillian and Audrey scream running over to her.

"I moved schools my mom got a job out here." She says chatting

After school they all went back to Lillian's house to do home work and then the door bell rings,so Lillian gets up to go answer it she was chating with them she came up stairs and says.

"Audrey that boy from school is hear and wants to talk to you." Lillian says giggling

"hhmmm okay ill be right back." Audrey says to them

"Well meet you outside at the pool tell him they can hangout with us if they like

Audrey goes down stairs while Lillian and Bree get there swim suits on and tell the other boys to fallow them out back.

Notes

Im sorry its not to go comment ideas hope you like it..... :)

Comments

No what happended was Niall and Audrey bummped in to each Other and then Bree was making out with liam
Lillian_Horen Lillian_Horen
11/21/13
I don't want you to be offended, so please take this as constructive cristism.
First of all, your grammar and spelling could use some work. It is a bit difficult to tell what you are saying when there is no proper use of punctuation or misspelled words.
Also, the title doesn't have a thing to do with the story which is a bit misleading. Your title should reflect upon your story.
Also, It's kinda hard to follow your 'storyline.' First Bree bumps into Liam then Audry comes out of nowhere and runs into Niall and then all the sudden they are best friends ?
Whith a little work, this could get better,
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ChloewuvsHarry ChloewuvsHarry
11/21/13
LOL ABBY NO ITS A STORY!!!!!!!!!!
Lillian_Horen Lillian_Horen
11/21/13

fix spelling lol this is abby

Audweeb Audweeb
11/21/13
im working on it luv ya 2
Lillian_Horen Lillian_Horen
11/20/13