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Sexy Boys

Friday part 2

Lillian's point of view


Lillian was freaking out all she could think about is what happened to the boys? what happened to Bree and Audrey? were they kidnaped? did they just leave her?
She started to look around again about to cry untill

She heard................. Someone.................Scream so loud she jumped and ran to her room locked the door and started freaking out was she about to be killed? she did not know she back up till she turned around and someone was there in a mask she screamed ran to the closet someone was there to she did not know what to so she ran to the door and There was someone there too she hide on the other side of the room rocking and she started to cry until they all screamed and took there masks off she was so mad she hit them all as they laughed and her friends were down stair because they and ran to the store she heard the door open so she ran to them and there said

"Baby whats the matter?"

all she did was run to them and cry and the boys came down stairs she did not talk to them they did not go to school they had to set up the party the boys stayed but she ignored them till Harry was in the room just with Me and he ran up to me and put his hand over my mouth and carried me up stairs bridal style and we went to my room to see Liam and Bree lying there makeing out I laughed and ran out of the room

AT around 5 people started to show they were every where and then there was beer and weed and people were wasted i remember danceing with Harry and then nothing i woke the next morning and had a huge head ace

Notes

I hope you al liked this chapter plzz tell me what u thought........Thx:D

Comments

No what happended was Niall and Audrey bummped in to each Other and then Bree was making out with liam
Lillian_Horen Lillian_Horen
11/21/13
I don't want you to be offended, so please take this as constructive cristism.
First of all, your grammar and spelling could use some work. It is a bit difficult to tell what you are saying when there is no proper use of punctuation or misspelled words.
Also, the title doesn't have a thing to do with the story which is a bit misleading. Your title should reflect upon your story.
Also, It's kinda hard to follow your 'storyline.' First Bree bumps into Liam then Audry comes out of nowhere and runs into Niall and then all the sudden they are best friends ?
Whith a little work, this could get better,
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ChloewuvsHarry ChloewuvsHarry
11/21/13
LOL ABBY NO ITS A STORY!!!!!!!!!!
Lillian_Horen Lillian_Horen
11/21/13

fix spelling lol this is abby

Audweeb Audweeb
11/21/13
im working on it luv ya 2
Lillian_Horen Lillian_Horen
11/20/13