The Story Critic - Comments, page 4

Hey maybe you could rate my story maybe? It's called The Bad Boy and The New Girl I sorta ended it but I think you could tell me if it is good enough to continue

Hey maybe you could rate my story maybe? It's called The Bad Boy and The New Girl I sorta ended it but I think you could tell me if it is good enough to continue

Could u co author my story if u can it's called The Bad Boy and The New Girl

can you read my story? is called Looking forward

Cna you please rate my story "live while we're young"? its my first fanfic and i was wondering what i could do to improve it! thanks!!!

can you rate my story "Let you Down"?

@Bella Christine

okay :D

@Unique_11
Could you review my story she's not afraid please?

tHANK YOU SO MUCH :)

@Unique_11

@ELMO

okay!

@Unique_11

Awwh, thanks :) Cant wait for my review ♥

Can you read my fanfic that im currently writing 'Dollhouse', its a supernatural 1D type of story and it has a hidden message behind the characters. Thanxx

@Lee_Loves_Looouiiss

of course! I just read your new chapter :D

Can you do my story Abused?

Hey, can u help me out with mine? Its called Amour, a Louis fanfiction


http://www.onedirectionfanfiction.org/Story/22031/Amour-Louis-Tomlinson-Fanfiction/1/


Thanx,
Suman x

Can you review mine? It's Called Secrets. Thanks !(:

@Unique_11
Of course!! I can't even believe it!!! :)
It has really motivated me to keep writing more! :)
Thanks again!

@Unique_11
It's okay

@Fivesexof1D

your welcome :D

thank you! <3