The Story Critic - Comments, page 3

@MC Nialler x

haha thanks :)

OH MAH , GOODNESS ! Thankyou, so much ! I love my review :D I'm like trying not to scream, but I'm literally jumping around my room ! ily <3

Can you review my story Broken Glass Slipper?

Can you please do my friends she really wants to know its called, "Dangerous..." By Katy belle

Can you do mine? (: It's called 'tomber amoureux' which is French for 'fall in love'. Please & thanky you ! <33

Could you review my stories? Their called Coming Home and Wicked :)
Thanks

Could you do mine? It's called Rewrite This Story. My friend told me that its good but nobody seems to be commenting or subscribing... :( I just wanted an unbiased opinion

Do mine? (: I would love it, it's called "Everything Has Changed" (:

@UniqueMOFO_11

Whatever is convenient for you :) Maybe like 2 or 3?

@OneDirectionInc

okay your review should be out later today! How many chapters should I read?

Hi! Would you mind reading a few chapters of my story 'Serendipity?' I know you guys have your hands full with the other reviews, though. Thanks love :)

Xx. Emily

Me please! Xx

Please do my story, 100 Days To Say I Love You, thanks.

Please do my story "Marcel." I just wanted to tell you that I don't use like commas and stuff, because I'm dyslexic and I get confused about where to put them. I understand if you don't want to read it because of that.

My only story (that night) im working on it still but rate it please?

Hi, can you review my story Don't Let Me Go? I'm sorry if this bugs you....
http://www.harrystylesfanfiction.com/Story/19627/Dont-Let-Me-Go/

@UniqueMOFO_11

Thaaank youu! c:

@niallstagram__

Sure!

Hello :) Could you check out my story called 'The Wish' ,and could you help with any ideas, anything would work for like going later into the story, and also tell me if I need to make any improvements for next time. ty and ily<3 I just wanna know if i'm doing alright so far :)

~ one more thing, could you take a look at the youtube channel thing, its not a story but an idea i had and want to know if people can help ! :D

my stiry confused ?? xxx