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Hello! Could you please review my story? It's called, "The Chosen One." :)

Jen Storm @ HarryStylesFanfiction.com
10/9/13

do you mind reviewing mine, it's called my bully's boyfriend, please ? x

honeyhoran
10/9/13

Please review mine ? 'Irrestiable temptation' thank you! Honest opinion please x

emmazzz
10/9/13

please check out my story confused. thanx x

Hannah Elizabeth
10/9/13

Could you please check out my story perfect act? Thanks xo

zaynisthebestest
10/9/13

can you pleae check out my story 'Whole New World' ? thanks :)

Thatband1d @ HarryStylesFanfiction.com
10/9/13

Can you do mine it's called"all better" it's c kinda copy but it sou will get Bette r

Nialls_princess @ NiallHoranFanfiction.com
10/9/13

Can you do my story, "I Want to be Loved By You"? Thanks!

Miss M
10/9/13

Me? :)

AliceRose
10/8/13

Hey, I was wondering if you could check out the first chapter of my story. I scrapped my last one as it was awful, hopefully this one is better though. It's called Effy x

Isla @ HarryStylesFanfiction.com
10/8/13

Everything Has Changed or Hidden

inactive
10/8/13

could you check out either of my stories Ballerina Bruises or Unexpected Interest ?! Thanks so much :) xx

Corey @ HarryStylesFanfiction.com
10/8/13

Hey could you check out mine please ? It's called "Afraid of Love" . THANKS !!! <33333

TattoosPiercingsGang_PunkHarry @ HarryStylesFanfiction.com
10/8/13

Hey :) can you review my story?!?!?! Its called do you remember :) thanks!

Niall'sFUTUREwife
10/8/13

Hey, could you check one of mine as well, please? that would be really nice!
http://www.onedirectionfanfiction.org/Story/17715/I-Will-Wait/

http://www.onedirectionfanfiction.org/Story/11584/Counting-Stars/

musiclover17
10/8/13

can you look at my story please? I just started it and I don't know if it's at a good starting point. please rate and tell me what you think! http://www.onedirectionfanfiction.org/Story/20392/1000-Mistakes-counting/