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To Fall So Deep - Comments, page 4
oh. my. gosh. Robbie is such a %=€*^¥<'$(@$!/:!7$(!.&¥~+^\!!,*!!!! Part of me wants Harry to be the one to find her, but he's still such an idiot that I don't know... Someone really just needs to kill Robbie... and find Nina.
ROBBIE IS SUCH AN ARSE! Nina's dad should kick robbie, and his dad's ass. I hope it's harry that finds her.
@Livvie_Bear thank you so much for your comment and for taking the time to read this! Means a lot <3
@ThatRandomUnicorn Thanks for your comment! <3 Yes, Harry is such an ass. But I promise he redeems himself! :)
Harry is such an ass, but I don't quite like Robbie too much either. Harry just needs to get his shit together and tell Nina that he (obviously) likes her. And Nina should listen to Harry, even if he is an ass, and realize that she likes him as well.
@dontjockmystyles Ahhh! omg! Yes, you're right! Thank you for telling me. The accent thing comes up again, like 3 chapters later so now I can fix it around. Thanks again, for your feedback! <3
Amazing, as always but! When robbie is talking to nina. he goes 'woah no accent' British don't think they have an accent. They think we have an accent. So just change that around and make it like 'Woah, you have an accent. American?'
@ericajaine
you're very welcome doll, and will do. I love reading so i will do plenty more 'research'! I recommended your story to a few friends, because um (it's amazing) i hope they all search you up! <3
@dontjockmystyles OMG! You're the sweetest ever!! I'm so happy that you like my writing. I appreciate that so much because writing is a hobby of mine, and it is something I would like to have as a career. And all it takes is practice and "research." Read a lot of books, and write a lot of stories. From there your writing, creativity, and everything in between will grow and get better. Thank you so much!! <333
@dontjockmystyles
Okay, as i always comment after you update. I can't help but practically gawk at your writing. It's really amazing. You're detail, and vocabulary is exquisite. And i'm very jealous! I wish I had your gift in my stories as well, but maybe time will tell. You need to think about becoming an author! I would be your first fan. Keep writing babe! xx.
@ThatRebelUnicorn Yes! I am Filipino! I decided to have my main character Filipino because I wanted to put a little of myself into her. And because a few of the characters are Filipino, I wanted them to say a few words in Tagalog. But I added translations after the summary of the story that way the non-Filipinos can understand too! :) And THANK YOU super much, love! Thanks for reading and I will update asap. <3
I teared up a bit. On another note, i wanna kick robbie in the balls. Little horny mofo. I hope harry beats the crap out of him.
3/28/14