To Fall So Deep - Comments, page 2

Oh no!! Arianne!! Thats sad!! Thanks god Kathleen and Nina are okay!! But still... Poor girls!

OH MY GOD!! Imma kill Joleen!! How could she do that!! Yes betrayedd betrayed... Stop thinking it and go slap that b***h!!! So far it's great!! I'm on chapter 3 hahah goshh i want to want to keep reading!!!byeee

Heyy!! I heard you're story is good so i'll start reading it right know... I've got a question... Is their mother dead or alive?? Sorry, but i'm confused.... Another thing... My third surname is Vitale!! I mean my grandmothers surname is Vitale, so my dads second surname is Vitale, so... It's my third surname!! It's not that exciting actually but when i read Elissia VITALE, i was like WOW I HAVE TO COMMENT THIS... Haha.. It's not really funny... But yeah.. Byee!! I have to start reading!!

Do not thank me ! Your writing is amazing, and I'm so happy to have read it ! I wish it would have had more views, but all in all your writing is amazing, and I hope you continue to write much more !

@dontjockmystyles I KNOWWWWW!!! I think that's one of the reasons why Gemma's death was so sad to me-- that she wasn't even able to meet Nina. And I agree! Des' priorities are a little skewed, not realizing that care and love and attention speaks more than physical wants/needs. Thanks for reading from the beginning and all your awesome feedback! I seriously appreciate it! <333

MEEEEPP. I had gone on sort of like a mini hiatus. BUT GEMMAAAAAA AND NINA DIDN'T EVEN MEET HER. Maybe gemmas passing will smack some sense into desmond but grr....i'm just sort of upset that the father isn't thinking of the emotional needs of his children but rather the physical needs. (Clothes, food, games) AND although to some parents that shows love, and affection. I don't think he realized it until now. Obsessed with your story, and I can't believe that it's almost over...SOBS.

AHHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH FINALLLYYYY. That is all. I will wait here until I see married Harry and Nina

@dontjockmystyles Ahhh!! Late reply!! Been swamped! But THANK YOU nonetheless for your feedback!! That's exactly what I wanted to do in this chapter.... that love means loving the flaws too! I hope to one day have an extraordinary love like the ones we read in fanfictions. Thank you again for your review, I really appreciate it!

As i just caught up .. . . A HHHHHHH THEY'RE MARRIED. I think i'm mentally planning a party in my head right now. I really do hope that maybe harry's mother sees them together, and accepts them. Maybe as if they remind her and desmond's relationship way back when!

I loved the detail in this chapter! Captured the beautiful scene so perfectly. I love how perfect they are, and how they fit each other so well. He loves every aspect of her, and her insecurities, and she accepts him regardless of how f'd up his family may be. It's really sort of bittersweet. I can't wait to see how this will play out in the end. !

@ThatRandomUnicorn Gah, I know they are SO young. And totally acting out, and not thinking things through... which is the beauty (and scary part) of being so young. You feel so deep, and act upon those feelings with passion, that you forget your mind has a say too. Thanks so much for your feedback! <3

Jezabelle is such a bitch, and as much as I love Harry proposing and her saying yes to getting married, aren't they a bit young? Part of me is saying "yes, they should wait because they're too young" but the other part of me says "who cares they're fucking perfect for each other". I'm torn but loved the update. <3

@dontjockmystyles LOL I love Leina! She's super feisty, and is actually inspired by one of my best friends.

Awe i loved this update, and that corrine is being such a sweetheart. I love that greg is so open to harry, and i still hate desmond.

Just to quickly comment before i keep reading i love the leina told the camera man to bugger off LMFAO. sorry. just found it funny. *continues reading*

@dontjockmystyles Awww! Stahhhppp! You're making me blush! You're so sweet, it's ridiculous! Thank you so much for your kind words. It means a lot, especially coming from you because I believe that you're such an amazing write as well. <33


@ThatRandomUnicorn Ugh. I love him <3 And he's only going to keep going with the feels haha

She told him; you go Nina! And oh my gosh, Harry at the end though. Mentally crying because what is life?

Again, I love your writing, and how it just flows! It truly amazes me! On my next update on all my other books i will be shouting you out, you deserve so much more on this story!

Styles's father really needs to understand that there are other years to come, and that becoming a mayor isn't everything. He is only jeopardizing his relationship with his family, and in the end whether he likes it or not he'll have to accept Nina regardless if her father wins or not.

@ThatRandomUnicorn I agree with you. I totally think it's worth it to think what ifs. They honestly make me happy and giddy inside. When I'm feeling down, all I do is think about the boys and all the different possibilities and BAM instant happiness... that, or I watch "This Is Us" for the upteenth time haha!

@ericajaine
I absolutely hate what ifs. Someday we'll all find someone. Though it most likely won't be Harry, Niall, Louis, Liam, or Zayn, there is someone out there who will do all of these cutesy things with us that we only fantasize and write about in fanfictions. Eventually, the boys will find their someone, too, and we'll have wasted so much of our time on what ifs. Is it worth it though? I like to think it is :)

FINALLY ! Hmm... who else is a patient. I would think it would Jezzabelle. She has such strong views of being on top and the popular queen, i wouldn't doubt she needed therapy.