To Fall So Deep - Comments

OMG ARE YOU FILIPINO TOO?!

Pleasee continueee!!! Howw cann doo thiss to uss!! Firstt youu kill Gemm!! Then Nialler!!! Andd noww Ninaa?!!! Andd i'vee been thinkingg thatt Harry died too,, i mean, the last sentence makes it seem like itt!!!!! Pleasee gurrlllll PLEEEEASEE postt the epilougeee iff you dont want me to die with thosee three (four in mi opinion) beautiesss!!!!!! Ii lovee the storiii andd argggg i wantt, i mean, i NEED to noww whatt happens!!!! Luvv yaa

@ThatRandomUnicorn Haha nonliteral murder is what my stories are here for! Yass, Jezabelle has major issues that she totally needs to handle. Thank you again for reading and sticking with this story for such a long time! I seriously appreciate it!!

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@Ray_Haque THANK YOU UBER MUCH!! <3333

Commenting is the least I can do to tell you how much I love and appreciate your story, and it doesn't take too much time to do so, so I figure why not comment? But oh my gosh, I cannot believe that was the last chapter and all that's left is an epilogue. And this chapter just… I think it slightly killed me - more than you already nonliterally have that is - when you killed her off and then with Harry and everything. And freaking Jezabelle… Don't even get me started on how much I want to murder that bitch right now. The chapter is written beautifully nonetheless, and I can't wait for the epilogue. xx

Aaagghhhh I just LOVE this story! LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!

@Tommo_Be_Like Yay! It makes me happy that you picked up on all the little clues I left in the story. Yes, Jezabelle is a crazy mofo! And Gemma's death made me feel so sad after writing it, and Niall's death still makes me frown. I love Niall so much and his character was super important to Nina and Harry. He was the perfect friend in the story, and so to kill him off was heartbreaking. Thanks so much for reading and your comment! <333

@Mr. Fuzzy Lumpkins Gahhh! Thank you very much for your comment. And I'm SORRY for killing off Niall-- yes, he is gone. It still makes me sad! :'(

@ThatRandomUnicorn Thank you SO much for your comment & sorry for the late reply. Your words are super sweet and I can't thank you enough for always taking the time to read and to comment on my story! <33

I KNEW IT!!!! I did!!! I knew it i knew it I KNEW IT !!!! I knew it since Greg told Niall there was somebody giving Des information about Nina, i knew it since Kathleen told Nina that a girl had attacked her, and my thoughts where cleared when Jezabelle arrived to school looking... REALLY diferent!!! Ugg i knew jezabelle was crazy!! Poor Gem!! Her death actually made me cry!! And it's really sad to think that Nina never met her, they never even talked to each other....
hey!! You can't kill our little blonde irish cute hungry leprechaun!! Poor Nialler!!! He HAS to live!!!!!!! Pleeeeeaaaasee!! Pretty pleeeaaase?!!
i lovee the storyyy, it keeps getting better!!! Goshhh Harry has to tell Nina what's going on before she does something stupid, and.... Now that i think bout it, i'm actually scared about Jezabelle. She's a freak!!!!

NOOOOOO!!!!! Niall! NO! You can't die! Please!
Erica, you are amazing and like the greatest writer on here hands down but please, don't kill Niall

Right? Dramatic irony has to be least favorite of the ironies…
But not Niall!!! First, you kill Gemma, and now, you're having Niall get shot (I'm not saying killed because my fingers are still crossed that he's alive, but if he dies, he dies with great respect). Seriously, though, if Niall dies I'm going to be devastated (whether he is portraying a fictional character or not). And what about Nina and Harry?! Gah! This story is making me so angry and sad at the same time right now, and I still absolutely love it. You are seriously one of my favorite authors on here even though this story is non-literally killing me <3

@ThatRandomUnicorn I feel you! It always drives me nuts when audiences know something that the characters don't. Like I'll watch a movie and start yelling at the screen because I, as a viewer, can see that the killer is RIGHT there but the characters don't know. I wanted to do the same with this chapter. Thanks so much for reading this story and for your feedback!! <33

@Tommo_Be_Like Gahh you're the sweetest. Thank you SO much for your kind words! And writing just takes practice. You just gotta do it, and keep writing, and you start honing your skills! And it goes for any hobby/talent.

I always knew Jezabelle was a complete whack job. If she hurts Harry or Nina in any way, I going to have to kill her. On the other hand, it is literally killing me that Nina doesn't know what is really going on and the she's believing some of the assumptions made by those stupid news reporters. The ending left me clueless about what she's thinking, so I hope she's not doing anything stupid.

I forgot something... YOU are AWESOMELY-AWESOME!! Haven't you read your own story? C'mon!! It's just AWESOME!! I try writting something like that and i repeat the same words everytime, like, i don't know why in some school work i wrote like: i would like.... I would also like... Would you please.... Please would you....AHHH!!! It's agggg!!
By the way, i'm in chapter 20, cutiess!!! I love Harry-Nina momentss they are so AWWWW!!! <333 luv yaa!!

@ericajaine Thankss!! Hahaha, i was bored and well, it's easy and quick to comment so, hahaha i read my comments and thought "i hope this doesn't bother her" i don't why but i thought of it!! Yesterday i stayed until really late readibg your story and i accidentaly woke up my sister four times, she even started to talk in her sleep!!
I'll check Laura's show later, maybe she's my long lost SisterAuntGrandmotherCousinWhatever

@Tommo_Be_Like Awww YOU'RE SO AWESOMELY-AWESOME! Your comments are seriously making my day, and I thank you from the bottom of my heart for taking the time to not just read my story, but comment too!! You're such a sweetheart & I greatly appreciate it super much!! && I love the last name Vitale... I actually stole it from one of my favorite YouTubers, Laura Vitale. She has a cooking show on YouTube, you should check her out if you haven't heard of her. <333

@dontjockmystyles Ahh you're sweet. And yea, sometimes I do wish I had more views/comments, but at the end of the day, the loyal people who do read this story mean greatly to me! <33

Noooo!!! Whatt?!!!! Noo!! It can't be!!! Gemma!! ill?? Noo pleaseee!! Im gonna cry!! Too much for just one story!!