Those Totally Dumb FanFic Moments [Editing] - Comments, page 30

27 OMG :,D

Yo you know when like people have to italicize or bold everything they say so if you say it out loud and enunciate the words as they're written it makes no sense and would just be better if they left the bolds and italicizes out or when they have run on sentences like this which I'm doing on purpose by the way but do you realize how annoying this is because then Kylie ate cheese and then she went to Starbucks and then Niall was there and then he had Nandos and then they ate it and then now Kylie's pregnant you know because I have like two in one annoying moments in here because I'm just that cool and yeah the end.
FINALLY. A FUCKING PERIOD. ^
"and then", "and then", "and then"!
STAHP PLEASE.
Anyways I feel kinda weird because I've done some of the things you've posted. And now I feel really self-conscious about it lol!
Anyways yeah I love this because it's so true sometimes and I laughed so hard at multiple places lol. Thanks for that. I really needed a laugh right now. :)

This is so bad, but I fucking hate it when stories are rated G or PG. Like, bitch, I did not come to read about fucking Harry and Kylie holding hands or sharing a Starbucks drinks together. Oh? You're drinking out of one straw together? WELL DAMN SLOW IT DOWN YOUR MOTHER WOULD BE SO DISAPPOINTED YOU NEED JESUS -_- No. I want to be withering in sexual feels.

But.

I dont want want to read about how "his green eyes darkened with lust as he ripped my panties off in one swift motion. He slammed into me and saw me wincing and asked if I was okay. I nodded in response and he rolled into me and I screamed his name and then I came beneath him and then we cuddled and fell into a deep sleep."

Slow. Fucking. Clap.

Bitch you suck don't ever write smut again. Buh-bye

It's the middle of the night right now where I am, and I started laughing so hard at Chapter 27 I woke my dad up. Woops.

Harry~Why is Kylie eating cheese? WHAT ABOUT STARBUCKS!
i laughed so hard that i made my dog leave the room xD i thought i was going to pee lol.
~Emily<3

It's so annoying when the authors note is longer than the chapter.
Bitch I don't want to know your life story I just want to read your fanfiction ok?
Thanks.

@I'm Better
Yeah I hate that too

@BooBear_CherBear
IKR

@BooBear_CherBear
IKR

When someone says that they won't update the story until they get a 10.0, like bitch, now i'm giving you one star.

@Niallhoranloverislonely
LOL

Ohmygosh I'm in love with a story BUT it has a LOT of CAP letters. Kylie! STOP YELLING AT ME!!! IT'S NOT MY FAULT!!!!! Wait a second am I supposed to pay attention to that word for 300 FUCKING MINUTES?
~Don't judge the epicness!

Ana's POV
I just happened to jump over and read this. First I smirked slightly. Then I snickered some. After that I went to Nandos (never even heard of freaking Nandos til 1D) and introduced myself to Niall who just happened to be there. We made out in the stock room 3 minutes later. Then Harry crashed into the room and punched Niall because he was in love with me too. What can I say Im just that ridiculously good looking all the guys love me. Then Liam me to marry him. I agreed of course. And we lived happily ever after and I toured witn them.

Im sad. I'm completely guilty of all these things :/

I wanna know...why are the characters pictures are always celebrities but have different names in the stories.

P.S. if this comment made you chuckle Go read my stories. Comment rate and vote :)

KThanksBye

(my sarcasm sucks today...not)

Chapter Twenty Six... I'm sorry. :'( But that's me

Ok this is freackin funny how the heck do u come up with this stuff ??

Hola

@BooBear_CherBear
Yeah that's too true.

I would love to be your friend lol..... Me and you are a lot alike :3

@Niallhoranloverislonely
Lol you make me laugh too and btw my name is Megan :3

But your parents would sure me for killing you with laughter so DON'T DIE!

@SexyStylesxx
Oh my god, I'm honored! c:\

That sounded sarcastic but I am serious.... Lol

By the way I talk a lot but

I hate it when....

The characters are trying to sound hip and slang. It's all like,

"Bruh I know what happened last night." Kylie joked.

"Oooh gurrll I know right it's like she dunno what she made for!" Kara also joke (Hate that)

"Can't she see dat idiot right over dere it's just foostratin'!" Sarah screamed.

"Ain't nobody cur bout dat chick!" Kylie reminded everyone. (Also hate it when it says EVERYONE but there are only 2 other freaking people there with the stupid character!)

It's just "HEY GUYS THERE'S A PARTY AT MY HOUSE BUT RIGHT NOW ONLY 2 PEOPLE ARE IN MY SIGHT BECAUSE I'M BLIND IN ONE EYE!"