Those Totally Dumb FanFic Moments [Editing] - Comments, page 29

Lol, number 35 & 36! Just, yes, so true!!

@Wrecking_Ball

I have read so many stories with the main character named Kylie, but most of them aren't on this website. yeah, even I use some of these moments in mine and I don't even realise it at the time. This story thingie is purely created for entertainment. And about Number 33, I am just saying that the author clearly states in the start of the story that the main character loves food but she never eats. Like, never.

I absolutely hate it hate it when Daniell and Liam are still together IN BRAND NEW STORIES,I mean they were a cute couple yeah and I shipped them all the way but hey honey news flash they ain't together anymore.I mean come on don't tell me that bullshit that you didn't know cuz then get off this website cuz your not a true Directioner.They need a serious update on their story.

This all makes me laugh. But chapter 35, quite a few stories are like that, but they are still really good

Chapter 35 almost every freckin story on this website is like that somehow in someway the two best friends go to a one direction concert and out if the million girls in the concert the boys always fall for the two best friends.LIKE MY NIGGA PLEASE hold the phone ain't nobody got time for that shit,the boys have got to entertain hundredths of screaming girls and they gonna focus in you the whole concert??haha no

*exampl

I doubt your gonna find a fanfiction without at least one of these... And to be honest I've never actually read a story where the main character is called Kylie. Alot of these chapters are really good but some I feel your being too picky.

Chapter 33 for exaple. I mean if the author was constantly describing breakfast, lunch & dinner you'd get very bored... There are some things you just have to assume happens. (eating, using the toilet etc.)

I live this it always makes me laugh. But for chapter 12 the reason for Starbucks and Nandos it's because it's Harry and Niall's favorite place to eat or drink. I'm not trying to be a smarty pants I just wanted to let you know. It's aggravating to me too that's why I used Smothie King.

I hate it when....

Harry always gets the girl that HATES him to go on a date

But Harry is supposed to be a small town boy that goes to a stupid school

He is not in One Direction

But yet he picks up Kylie in a freaking convertible

Excuse me, but Harry may you please tell me where you work? I would like to work there

Lol. c:

OMG! Number 5 is so trueee, hahaha this is frigging awesome

AHAHAHA MADI SINCE WHEN DID YOU WRITE THIS *wipes tears of laughter away* erk a lot of people do that haha sometimes with my author notes lol :P I hear an ice cream truck....CONCERT TOMORROW OH MY GOD SOMEBODY HOLD ME I SEE THE LIGHT EEP~ I'm still going to bring a bag of food

do mine biotch ;)

Ur so friggin funny I'm gonna die

Every chapter describes how I feel. It's like u read my mind and put it on the website. But for chapter 21 I do like the polyvores when it just has "I dressed in this[purple letters]" if it's just the link to nothing I am so mad cuz I forget where I am :)

I have seen a lot of that lol

@SexyStylesxx
Lol it's alright. I mean, I was just kinda surprised. It's fine though. I don't mind! You made it seem funny! So you're okay. I would just be pissed if you replied like,"BITCH what the FUCK is wrong with you?! You have the sickest mind to imagine a student with a teacher! Plus, it's so cliché!" Then I would be pissed. And yes, it's illegal for a student and teacher to be together.

I hate it when...

In the title it's all like

Name of Title!!!!!!!!


NO! USE 78 THOUSAND EXCLAMATION POINTS BECAUSE I WON'T KNOW WHAT HAPPENS IN THE STORY!

Exaggerate that the title is OH SO IMPORTANT because that's the only thing I'm reading!

Seriously am I supposed to scream the title?

Is this heavy metal or reading?


Because I don't want to scream the title... Do you want me to?

Apparently so..... BACK FOR YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I hate it when....

The summary tells more than the story....

It's like LOOK WOMAN! IF I WANTED TO READ A ONE SHOT I WOULD READ A ONE SHOT, OK?! BUT IF THIS IS GOING TO BE FREAKING 30 CHAPTERS FOR NO DANG REASON THEN GIVE IT UP!

**Rates 1 star**

@Awesome_girl_123

Lets just say I am the queen of sarcasm. Haha :)


@WontStopTill1DStops

Oh my god! I am so sorry. I don't mean to offend you in any way, I just write what comes to mine, oh my god! sorry c: