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What I hate, after one date they say I love you. Everything's way to rushed. Like dude slow down.

zaynisthebestest
10/17/13

It's frustrating when people don't put quotation marks when there's a conversation. Like, ughhh it's confusing. It's like, hey mom I said. Oh hello sweetie you want some breakfast? she asked. I've read stories like that and I'm like UH NO. Just sayin'

Harrehlovemeh
10/17/13

@Oreoslivelong

Hahaha, thanks! That like, made my day :)

JustKeepSwimmingStyles
10/17/13

Oh. When it is so rushed. They meet each other in Chapter 1, and are married in Chapter 4 with NO time lapse in between. So fucking annoying. By than I'm like, haha, yeah no.

Oreoslivelong
10/17/13

If this was published, I'd buy it.

Oreoslivelong
10/17/13

@SexyStylesxx

And so is, Vanessa and Jasmine

Bella Flores
10/17/13

@Marygrace

NO WAY! My name is Madi, Kylie is just an over-used fanfiction name :)

JustKeepSwimmingStyles
10/17/13

Wait your name is Kylie?

MaryGraceOfficial
10/17/13

Hahaha so ture

I AM CRYSTAL MALIK
10/16/13

Hahaha Kylie this is too good to be true! You should write a book on this!

WonderfulFreakofNature
10/16/13

I hate it when the fanfics don't start a new sentence for when they're speaking, it gets confusing if he/she is talking to someone or just talking in his/her head.

MaryGraceOfficial
10/16/13

I hate the fanfics, where you have like 30 characters and you are supposed to know all of them when ou start reading! Like how am I supposed to match all the names with any character? :o