Liam's Sex Slave - Comments, page 68

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I'd like to tell you that your story is not crap! I love your story! It's definitely really amazing! I enjoy reading it a lot & I get excited when you update! You portray Mia in a way where people can relate to her and I enjoy that. You are an awesome writer! Can't wait for you to update! :)

liloweewoah
10/21/13

Both this story and Down is amazing!I really love how Liam and Mia have this special bond.I can't wait for how Mia will get along with the boys.You write really well,It's really hard to find a good story and it's more hard to find a story that is well written.You're an amazing writer, Keep up the good work babe:)

Mary-Ann5412
10/21/13

i loveee itt!! omg im falling in love with liam all over again while i read thiiis :* <3 please update as sooooooooooooon as u can <3

#22498
10/21/13

I'm so in love with this story! I'm always so crazy happy, when I see that there's a upload! :)
So excited for thenext chapter - thank you for lighting up my day :) <3 <3

Rebecca
10/20/13

I love your story! You have actually developed the characters, it's good that it isn't just about sex. Don't listen to them, I bet they're just jealous because they can't write as good as you:)

annielovesliam
10/20/13

PHENOMINIALL CHAPTER!! You are just amaZayn and I would sob if you stopped!! Please continue your extraordinHARRY fanfic!! And whoever said that is just jealous because of how talented you are! Your story keeps me on the edge of my seat and leaves me wanting more!! And you're right!! A good story isn't just about sex! Just tell that person to read some dirty imagines instead of this!!! But I love it so please don't stop! Thank you so much for the shout out! It made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside!! Thanks!! :)

WontStopTill1DStops
10/20/13

Great chapter :) not much else I can really say lol

DreyMarley
10/20/13

lol :) love it <3 update <3

irishdimples
10/19/13

OMFG SHE'S DEAD MEAT.......... lol she should have hid haha

ForeverElounor
10/19/13

I love this you should update

Shadow @ HarryStylesFanfiction.com
10/19/13

OMG I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT!!!!! It is fantastic :) you should update more so I don't die lolz

i really want to know what happens, I think One of the guys is going to fall in ACUAL love with Mia, most
likely Liam

DiaLuvStagram
10/19/13

How date someone say that this story is so good please update soon xxx

Boobear and Nialler's Bitch
10/19/13

Don't listen to whoever messaged you! They do not know how a really good story with a plot is supposed to be written. You are truly talented and an amazing writer. I loved how the story started from the beginning to now. Keep it up and don't listen to those negative people. For one thing, your story is quite addictive. It's NOT crap! Update!!?? Love you chick!