Liam's Sex Slave - Comments, page 67

absolutely luv it its awesome

Omg I am so in love with this!! You are a really great writer, I love you!! Hehe and Happy early birthday! ^.^ <3333

DEAR AUTHOR, you lied this is one of the best chapters i've read in a fan-fic and i've read tons from everywhere!!! You deserve 2 be discovered. U r talented. i encourage you 2 keep writing/typing. N this is coming frm a teenage girl!

I'm so into this story!!!! More hot scenes please!!!!! I think Liam is totally falling! (I hope anyway!)

I think Louis is being a jerk !!! I think Liam is falling 4 Mia !! Update !!

wtf! When he just blowed the "i want u 2 be my sex slave" bomb ROTFL LOLLOllOLlOl

Absolutely love it(:

I think Liam is falling faster, but Mia is defiantly falling too.

Louis is just being a great friend, but maybe he should try to get to know her more before he starts judging and being mean

<3

I love this story! Please, keep the writing going

wow! that was a really good chapter! I can't wait for you to post the next one! I definitely think that louis should give Mia a chance! But i'm glad that at least one of them was suspicious about her. haha!

@MrsPayneHoran
what just happened.... Oh m god, I am going crazy

@WontStopTill1DStops
I agree

Hi! The new chapter was just perfect! I hope that #Lia stays real!! I love how you just perfectly put in all the boys, just wow. And I love how you perfectly described Mia's feelings! I don't know. I just REALLY LOVED this chapter! I can't wait for the next one! I hope you let Louis give Mia a chance. Even if he's protective! Anyway, have fun at the wedding and birthdays! Say happy birthday to your brother for me! Oh, and happy birthday! May it be filled with love and luck. May you enjoy your last year as a teen!!! HAPPY BURFDAY!!! (Yeah, that's how I say birthday, because that's how I first pronounced it... Don't judge. >.<)

Thanks for the lovely shout out! :)))
I really love your story, I hope you keep 'em coming, 'cause I need that stuff like crazy :)
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Thanks for the shoutout! :D have fun at the wedding and have a good birthday! Amazing chapter by the way:)

I absolutely love this story! Liam is so precious and caring and I love that you brought that out a lot in this story!! Beautiful work! Keep writing! :)

Don't be upset your story is not crap & if they want more sex scenes then they need to go watch some damn porn ! But I love your syor

omg

Ur very talented and I love this story! Keep weiting

UPDATE PLEASE!!!! <3

Ugh can they just get together >.< hes so cute with herrrrr