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Liam's Sex Slave - Comments, page 69
@Marthaa_thoee
OMG I totally agree with u and that song!!!!!!What does the fox Say?
OMG I totally agree with u and that song!!!!!!What does the fox Say?
@Flightless_Bird
:) Glad I made you happy!
Lol almost everyone I have talked to on her is from Texas...
:) Glad I made you happy!
Lol almost everyone I have talked to on her is from Texas...
Hello lovely!
First of all I want to say that your story and your writing is exceptional. The plot-line, everything. It's great. You're doing a great job! But if you were open to suggestions I would suggest perhaps elongating your stories. More specifically I mean use a little more detail, you know? It helps us readers feel like we are right there with the characters. But again, you have a great thing going here and you should keep it up darling, be a writer. WRITE WRITE WRITE! Put all your emotion into it, you know? Tell people what you can't tell anybody else through a story, make people llisten to you. But long story short, you have a talent and this piece is so amazing! I can't wait for you to update! So excited!
Love and hugs, Sarah
First of all I want to say that your story and your writing is exceptional. The plot-line, everything. It's great. You're doing a great job! But if you were open to suggestions I would suggest perhaps elongating your stories. More specifically I mean use a little more detail, you know? It helps us readers feel like we are right there with the characters. But again, you have a great thing going here and you should keep it up darling, be a writer. WRITE WRITE WRITE! Put all your emotion into it, you know? Tell people what you can't tell anybody else through a story, make people llisten to you. But long story short, you have a talent and this piece is so amazing! I can't wait for you to update! So excited!
Love and hugs, Sarah
@WontStopTill1DStops
Aw thank you so much for your kind words, I'm smiling like crazy :) lol
I'm from Texas so there's only two hours (ahead) in time difference.
Aw thank you so much for your kind words, I'm smiling like crazy :) lol
I'm from Texas so there's only two hours (ahead) in time difference.
@Flightless_Bird
OMGEEZ!! Yay!!! Happy 200 subscribers!!! You honestly deserve it for being such an extraordinHARRY writer!!! I'm glad to have been here for your amaZAYN accomplishment!!! May more come in the future! Yay!!!!! I was wondering how much is the time difference from where you are, to California!! Just so I know when you are going to update, because I LOVE YOUR phenomiNIALL FANFIC!!! OMG!!! Another boy!!!! Don't make me wait until Friday!!!! That's two days from now!!!! Uggggg!!! Lol :)
OMGEEZ!! Yay!!! Happy 200 subscribers!!! You honestly deserve it for being such an extraordinHARRY writer!!! I'm glad to have been here for your amaZAYN accomplishment!!! May more come in the future! Yay!!!!! I was wondering how much is the time difference from where you are, to California!! Just so I know when you are going to update, because I LOVE YOUR phenomiNIALL FANFIC!!! OMG!!! Another boy!!!! Don't make me wait until Friday!!!! That's two days from now!!!! Uggggg!!! Lol :)
Please update this story is like, amazing! I love it! And you're writing ANOTHER story? AAAHH! If it's even half as good as this one, it'll be awesomely amazing!
I love your writing :) KEEP IT UP YO
I love your writing :) KEEP IT UP YO
I'm in Australia what about you ?
10/17/13