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I don't think you've spent much time on planning your story.
I think you rush things. And your readers doesn't know a thing about your main character because you skipped everything.
Some things I think that might help you out:
You mix your past tense with your present tense. You write in present tense and then two lines in past tense then present again, after you wrote the chapter, read it before you post it.
I've noticed that in your first chapter, you said she won two tickets to the 1D concert, but only your main character went.
You should pay more attention to what you write, because in your chapters after that you might need to mention that again and if you don't know what's going on in your book you might confuse your readers and that's how your readers lose interest.
Also, maybe try another cover image?
I'm really not saying your book sucks, I've noticed that it is your first fanfiction, but just try to spend some more time on your book, don't rush things.
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Hi!
I was wondering if you could please do a review on my Fanfiction The Night It All Went Down?
There's a few mistakes, I know, as I write it on my iPad and sometimes it autocorrects or I hit a wrong letter- when I edit it, since I'm not the most observant person in the world, they don't always get picked up!
Thank you :)
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