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I like the idea you have for your story, it's mysterious, I've always loved books like that.
Although I think you are rushing your book. If you rush your book then you'll run out of ideas by chapter 20. Most people like reading a lot, well if it's a good story. And you really have a good story line. I just think that what happened in your first two chapters, could have been made into 4 or maybe 5 chapters if you concentrated on her thoughts more. I'm not saying tell your readers why everyone thinks she needs help, just maybe write about how she feels about everything whilst you leave t mysterious at the same time!
And then something else, spend more time writing your chapters, concentrate on your characters and their surroundings.
But I like your story line.
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Hi!
I was wondering if you could please do a review on my Fanfiction The Night It All Went Down?
There's a few mistakes, I know, as I write it on my iPad and sometimes it autocorrects or I hit a wrong letter- when I edit it, since I'm not the most observant person in the world, they don't always get picked up!
Thank you :)
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