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Everything Fanfiction. I DON'T DO 5SOS

Fanfiction fuck ups #1

So I read a story today and it annoyed the living hell out of me, so I'm sharing it wth you lovely people!

I hate how Lauren is such a slut, that she fucks her boyfriend EVERWHERE.
Like they're on a plain, so the fuck in the-might I add SUPER SMALL-bathroom.
They're at a club so yet again, they fuck in the bathroom.
They're at a shop where Lauren works and there's no people, so she fucks him in the shop.
They're at home, BUT HEY FORGET THE BED, THE KITCHEN SOUNDS NICE. Like what the fuck? You eat there!
They're at her house, but her parents room is closer, so they fuck in their bed. Like seriously Lauren? Your parents sleep there!!!
They're in a car, but hold on 1/5 1D, let's pull up NEXT TO THE ROAD because Lauren is a slut and wants to fuck!

Sorry if anyone has that in their stories, but seriously, THAT's SICK.
I have nothing against books with sex in, but don't be a slut Lauren.

Notes

Comments

Hi!
I was wondering if you could please do a review on my Fanfiction The Night It All Went Down?
There's a few mistakes, I know, as I write it on my iPad and sometimes it autocorrects or I hit a wrong letter- when I edit it, since I'm not the most observant person in the world, they don't always get picked up!
Thank you :)

Night_Owl Night_Owl
2/14/15

@Telichia DLR
Thank you soo much doll! I appreciate it! I'm glad you enjoyed it. The sequel is up now if you're interested in reading it :) Your review is much appreciated love. Thanks again muah and merry late Christmas, hope you got what you wanted :)

Liv_For_Payne Liv_For_Payne
12/26/14

@Liv_For_Payne
All done babe. Merry (late) Christmas! x

Telichia DLR Telichia DLR
12/26/14

Hi, uhm earlier on you did a review on my story Cross Country, I was actually wondering if you could possibly read it again since it's completed and also it's been tweaked a little. It would mean a lot if you could! No rush, it's Christmas and you need to enjoy it! Have a good Christmas doll

Liv_For_Payne Liv_For_Payne
12/26/14

@Telichia DLR Thank you so much!! I loved the reviews! I'm glad you love my work ☺ you're amazing!

Megan_Goings Megan_Goings
12/26/14