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To Help Thy Directioners (Reviews and More)

Character Development

Now I love Japan culture, I love manga, I love anime, I love drawing that way, and I learned a lot on how to do stories through that, which I later helped people with on hatena for the ds, which I wish would hurry up already!

Anyways, you HAVE to have a character that people like right away, with some flaw that they can fix over the story line. That's the main thing when it comes to mangas and animes, easy examples are Bleach, Naruto, One Piece, they all had to get past their weak points to move on in the story and be more loved than before.

A good example of someone doing great character development on this site, would have to be Niallsnandos with her story Why Won't You Catch Me? Her main character was depressed and had no real great traits to her, in all honesty I didn't really like her and found her to be annoying, but Niallsnandos wrote so well that she made the character grow on you. Later, *no spoilers so don't worry* she developed her character, she overcame most of her flaw and you ended up falling in love with the character.

That’s your main goal, your character can’t be such a huge loving character at first, they need their flaws and weak points so they can grow and develop throughout the entire story, making the reader connect better, because if they are just perfect without fixing anything; no one is going to connect to your character and no one will enjoy the story as much as they should.

You just need some point in your story, which is usually the climax of the story, in which your character realizes her/his issues or whatever it is and changes at that moment, hitting the climax ride of suspense for your readers.

Develop those characters, don’t leave them the same old same old throughout the entire story, let me say that will be boring!

Notes

Comments

Hey, I would like my story to get reviewed, so I can see where I might have any flaws in my writing, or just an overall "how good is this story", ya know? My readers aren't leaving me a lot of comments, and I really want an outside opinion on my story. It is called "The Job That Changed It All". Harry fanfic. Thank you!

-CharlieRose

@bananabreeana
" Change My Mind"

Jasper_Renee_II Jasper_Renee_II
5/12/14

@Lindzeyluvs1D
What story? You have 3 on it

bananabreeana bananabreeana
5/12/14

Number 6 I just want to know of my fanfic is any good, it's my first, I'm trying to get all the opinion on it I can. I was wondering if you could give me a rate on it. My name is Lindzey, and my username is @Lindzeyluvs1d.
Thamks love!!!

Jasper_Renee_II Jasper_Renee_II
5/11/14

Can you review my story:In-Her-Mind?

~Please&Thanks!!

Joint-lit Joint-lit
5/11/14