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Cigarettes and Valentines

Wow. That was almost flawless! I really love the way you write, and there were only a couple errors. Since there were only two chapters I don't really have a lot, because your start was basically perfect.

Honestly the only few mistakes that I found were ones from auto correct or spellchecks. Many times this website messes up spacing when you fix your spelling errors, but they are easy fixes. When you finish a chapter, I strongly suggest you read over your work at least two times. As a author it's easy to read over these kind of mistakes because you know what's supposed to go there. And as a reader sometimes when you have to go back and figure out what something says it can take away from the writing.

I really love how original this punk fan fiction is; I would never expect a tattooed, rough on the edges kind of guy be book smart. I really hope you continue this story, you really set yourself up for a story with good potential! Sorry this review was shorter, but there wasn't a lot to correct. You have done an amazing job so far, you definitely have a new subscriber!

Overall rating: 9.5

Notes

Notes If you do not like the review that was given to you for any reason at all let me know, and I will take it down ASAP. I hope I helped you with creating a better story!

❤ This_Crazy_Girl.

Comments

@Oops_Hi

Hii! Yeah I'm still (kind of) active. I could probably do it, but it could be a while I usually get on like once a week. But I might be able to make some time. c: can't wait!

This_crazy_girl
8/27/15

ntEeeyyyyy back again this account use to be called Goldenheart. You reviewed Secrets(use to be called Stand), and Captured which both times helped, so I got another Fanfic if you do not mind checking out its just the start of it though. It's Called Angles and Demons. please and thank you I dont know if you are still active though. and if you wouldnt mind please do another review of Secrets since we added a lot. again please and thank you.

Hi_Oops
8/21/15

Could you do A Feeling That I Can't Fight? It was my first fanfiction and I don't know how I did on it. Please and thank you ;D

Steffi_Hemmings00 @ 5SecondsOfSummerFanfiction.com
1/17/15

I don't know if I asked yet or not lol but coukd you please review my story (how you changed my life) because its my first fanfic ever and I would like on advice and would like to know how I'm doing