
Reviews with the Reader
It takes Patience
As I review a story, I start from the top and work down. Cover, title, summary, characters, then chapters.
The cover. I LOVED IT! Although maybe a quote from the story would be nice!
Title. It was GREAT! Nothing wrong with it! Checked out to me!
Summary. No spelling or grammar mistakes. Your summary didn’t give away too much…which I like. Great job!
Chapters. I read the first two because they were both short. But that is the only thing I can find wrong with them. I wish I could review more, but honestly I can tell you worked so hard on your stories. I appreciate all the hard work you put into these stories of yours. You describe things in detail (I really like that) and you’re an amazing writer. Keep it up!
Notes
Great job on this story!
@Oops_Hi
Hii! Yeah I'm still (kind of) active. I could probably do it, but it could be a while I usually get on like once a week. But I might be able to make some time. c: can't wait!
8/27/15