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The Lovely Enemy

WEEKEND!!!!!!!!!!!!


. OMFG It's finally the fucking weekend!!! YAY!!!! Anyways.....

. After the terribly long fucking bus ride, I walked inside and I could tell people on the bus were staring at me..... As I walked over to our wooden cupboard, I heard footsteps behind me. I knew it was my little twerp of what I call a brother. "What do you want Tyler?" I asked annoyed. "What are you eating?" he sing/said. "Well, I was gonna eat some of mom's tuna salad before your little ass walked in here and got all up in my shit!!!!!" I said really mad at him. "Well I wan't some!" he sid in a whiny voice, god I hate that voice!!!!! "No, to fucking bad your gonna have to find yourself somthing else to eat. Then he started to give me the death glare.... whatever! I then walked up to my room and locked the door so that the devil's child couldn't get in!!!!!!

. I sat on my bed and ate my mom's tuna salad. As I was stuffing my face full with tuna I got a call on my iphone (white case not black.) It was Kimmy I thought about not answering it but, I did anyways. "Hwellow" I said with my mouth full of food. "Hey uuum-" I cut her off " I'm eating" "Ok...... but, what are you doing?" She asked. "Nothing much...you?" I hoped she wou-my thinking got cut off. "Can you hang out?" she asked nervously. I yelled across the hall and my mom said yes and she could bring me. "My mom said yes yes and she could bring me!" " Yay!!!! See you in a couple of minutes!!!!!!" She said overly excited.

Notes

Hope you liked it btw the book is gonna start getting way better in like the next chapters.....and COMMENT!!!! I don't even know if you guys likt i thought i was gonna erase it but, obviously I didn't so COMMENT so i can tell if u like it!!!!

luv u all,
Hazza lvr 4 eva

Comments

Thank you very much! I have realised that and I'm gonna go over it and fix all of that very soon!

It's good but can I be really honest? I think maybe you might need to improve your grammar. I'm not trying to be nasty or mean or anything but you did say you wanted an honest comment so......yeah! :) Good luck with the rest of the story!!! :):):):):):):):)

Night_Owl Night_Owl
6/7/14

UGGHHH COMMENT CUZ OTHERWISE IM GONNA ERASE IT REALLY SIERSOULY I DONT KNOW IF U GUYS LIKE IT....PLEASE IM LETTEARLY BEGGING YOU!!!!!!!!!! COMMENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hazza lvr 4 eva Hazza lvr 4 eva
4/29/14

PLESE PLEASE PLEASE COMMENT! I REALLY WANT TO KNOW UR OPIONIONS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)

Just so you know Maddi I changed the summary so that Kimmy could be like with Niall since their alike. Soooo.... Ummm.... Yeah.... :) @Hazza lvr 4 eva