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The Lovely Enemy

The Suprise



. At the very end of the day my friend Kimmy an I were walking to my locker talking about how we should hang out this weekend. All of a sudden Kimmy saw Harry walking over twoards us and she said "gotta go call you later ok?" "Ok bye!" I yelled as she ran to her locker. Then I started to put my books in my locker and get my backpack ready. I could feel Harry stares penetrating into my back I knew he was standing there I just didn't want to turn around. Then he started to ask me something but I couldn't quite make out what he was saying becuse his voice was all shakey when he finally repeated himself "Would you mabye like to go out like on a date sometime....?" I stopped putting my homework in my bag and turned around to look at him then I waited a brief moment then said "I guess so er I mean umm... yeah." He asked if I would give him my number but as I was writing my cell number down I started to have second thoughts. What am I doing we've hated each other since kindergarten. What if Kimmy gets mad at me because she has a crush on him. But I just gave my number to him anyways. "Bye. I guess I will call you later." "Bye!" I responded. After Harry left I caught the bus just in time before it left. On the way home all I could think about is if I made the right choice or not.

Notes

Sorry I forgot to update but there u go hopefully a little better than the last two!
please comment vote and suscribe! Thats what kepps me writing i love to hear peoples opionins!

Luv u all,
Hazza lvr 4 eva

XOXOXOXO

Comments

Thank you very much! I have realised that and I'm gonna go over it and fix all of that very soon!

It's good but can I be really honest? I think maybe you might need to improve your grammar. I'm not trying to be nasty or mean or anything but you did say you wanted an honest comment so......yeah! :) Good luck with the rest of the story!!! :):):):):):):):)

Night_Owl Night_Owl
6/7/14

UGGHHH COMMENT CUZ OTHERWISE IM GONNA ERASE IT REALLY SIERSOULY I DONT KNOW IF U GUYS LIKE IT....PLEASE IM LETTEARLY BEGGING YOU!!!!!!!!!! COMMENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hazza lvr 4 eva Hazza lvr 4 eva
4/29/14

PLESE PLEASE PLEASE COMMENT! I REALLY WANT TO KNOW UR OPIONIONS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)

Just so you know Maddi I changed the summary so that Kimmy could be like with Niall since their alike. Soooo.... Ummm.... Yeah.... :) @Hazza lvr 4 eva