The Lovely Enemy - Comments

Thank you very much! I have realised that and I'm gonna go over it and fix all of that very soon!

It's good but can I be really honest? I think maybe you might need to improve your grammar. I'm not trying to be nasty or mean or anything but you did say you wanted an honest comment so......yeah! :) Good luck with the rest of the story!!! :):):):):):):):)

UGGHHH COMMENT CUZ OTHERWISE IM GONNA ERASE IT REALLY SIERSOULY I DONT KNOW IF U GUYS LIKE IT....PLEASE IM LETTEARLY BEGGING YOU!!!!!!!!!! COMMENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

PLESE PLEASE PLEASE COMMENT! I REALLY WANT TO KNOW UR OPIONIONS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)

Just so you know Maddi I changed the summary so that Kimmy could be like with Niall since their alike. Soooo.... Ummm.... Yeah.... :) @Hazza lvr 4 eva

@Hazza lvr 4 eva @GG Styles
That sound's fern. I want to hear them too. I mean... I am the co author. So yeahs.

Hi gg styles what are your ideas? Just so u know I have written out. Lot of chapters I just have to post them but I want to know what u got an Idea about!

hey message me for some good ideas cause im a good writer and i have some ideas :P