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The Lovely Enemy

Class

Zoe's Outfit

. We were in Science and I was sitting in the very back right across from Harry UGH! Well I looked over at his totally unbearable face and he was staring at me I had to admit his eyes were kind of magical sort of... It seemed like we were staring into each others eyes for hours. I sware if you look into his eyes it's like you could never look away. But then class ended. For some odd reason I felt sorta into him but I don't think that that's possible because we've hated each other for years!

Notes

Just in case you are wondering i updated quick because the intro was super short so there you go guys! Please comment i love when people comment then it gets me even more pumped to update! Comment, vote, and suscribe!

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Hazza Lvr 4 eva
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Comments

Thank you very much! I have realised that and I'm gonna go over it and fix all of that very soon!

Hazza lvr 4 eva
6/8/14

It's good but can I be really honest? I think maybe you might need to improve your grammar. I'm not trying to be nasty or mean or anything but you did say you wanted an honest comment so......yeah! :) Good luck with the rest of the story!!! :):):):):):):):)

Night_Owl
6/7/14

UGGHHH COMMENT CUZ OTHERWISE IM GONNA ERASE IT REALLY SIERSOULY I DONT KNOW IF U GUYS LIKE IT....PLEASE IM LETTEARLY BEGGING YOU!!!!!!!!!! COMMENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hazza lvr 4 eva
4/29/14

PLESE PLEASE PLEASE COMMENT! I REALLY WANT TO KNOW UR OPIONIONS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)

Hazza lvr 4 eva
4/4/14

Just so you know Maddi I changed the summary so that Kimmy could be like with Niall since their alike. Soooo.... Ummm.... Yeah.... :) @Hazza lvr 4 eva