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UPDATE plzz read

HEYY GUYS!!!! sorry I have not posted lately I have no clue what the next chapter should be about If you don'd mind please help me out if you want me to update the next chapter and what should happen next

Okay well I have to go but please comment and help me out thx.........:)

Comments

No what happended was Niall and Audrey bummped in to each Other and then Bree was making out with liam

Lillian_Horen
11/21/13

I don't want you to be offended, so please take this as constructive cristism.
First of all, your grammar and spelling could use some work. It is a bit difficult to tell what you are saying when there is no proper use of punctuation or misspelled words.
Also, the title doesn't have a thing to do with the story which is a bit misleading. Your title should reflect upon your story.
Also, It's kinda hard to follow your 'storyline.' First Bree bumps into Liam then Audry comes out of nowhere and runs into Niall and then all the sudden they are best friends ?
Whith a little work, this could get better,
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