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What Makes You Beautiful - Comments, page 10
This story is sooooooooo GOOD!!!!
I was just wondering if you could give Harry's or Bella's POV instead of narrating it because its just easier that way
I don't mean to be critical but could you please consider it
BTW you truly are an amazing and talented writer
@XKALEIGHSTYLES57X
Just...Lilo is so adorable! I cannot deny it! :P Same, I will never believe in Larry. And I mean never.
I am nervous about posting the next chapter but I will push on and be positive about it! I really hope I deliver. And once again, you're going to make me cry because you're being so incredibly kind and sweet!! Love ya, girl!! xx
@LivinLikeLarry
Don't even get me started on If I Could Fly. Even just thinking about the song makes me cry! Thanks, girl, for always leaving such sweet comments that motivate me a great deal xx
@blankspace1
Oh gosh I'm so excited! ♡
Are you serious? I could've swore I was the only one, because that's what it felt like! It's Larry this, Larry that. I'm just like hell no. It's Lilo XD I don't think I'll ever believe in Larry. Ever. So you're right I do adore Lilo and I'm so glad you do too! And you are welcome! I won't ever stop reading until the story is over! And even by then I'll probably read it over again haha.
Yaaaas if i cohld fly makes me cry and the song we dont talk anymore is fiiire lol. Great update, it was so cute!!! ♡♡
@XKALEIGHSTYLES57X
YAY!! Told you this chapter was sweet XD Sunday is the next update so not a very long wait :) I freaking love the song, can't get it out of my head! I hope you enjoy Sunday's chapter!
P.S. I cannot tell you how good it feels to find a fan(s) that don't believe in Larry. I hate that ship and I don't believe it one bit. However, I adore Lilo, just like you! I was watching videos of Liam and Louis on stage the other day and they were just too cute, chucking water over each other! Thanks for reading, girl, I appreciate it! <3 xx
OMG NOW YOU'VE GOT ME SUPER EXCITED. This chapter was so sweet, my stomach is bouncing with butterflies and my cheeks hurt once again. I can't wait until the next update! P.S. I've already heard the song and I LURV IT!!
@LivinLikeLarry
@XKALEIGHSTYLES57X
Hey, girls! Just want to say that the vampire story is coming along nicely. Got 4 chapters written already and the first chapter will be up in about 3-4 weeks! xx
Oh and PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!
6/20/16