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What Makes You Beautiful - Comments, page 9
Great chapter, and yes walking in the wind is PERFECT for roadtrips, that was like the theme song for my spring break drive to fort lauderdale!
Another great chapter. I've been stuck in bed the last week and your story is one of the things I look forward to most!
@blankspace1
Lucky!!!!! I have seen them only twice, once in Kansas city for wwa and otra in indianapolis
@LivinLikeLarry
1D concerts are the best, right? I've seen the boys 4 times and those 4 nights were completely magical! Gonna update later on today xx
@LivinLikeLarry
You really like the Harry pictures, don't you? Well, you're not alone! :P Glad you love the titles as well as the story itself!! xx
@blankspace1
I didn't mean to be critical I mean your story is awesome just the way it is but it was just a bit difficult to keep up like that because all the other stories I've read are from 1st person POV but I'm sure I'll get around to it.
@just_that_girl
Thank you very much for the compliments!
Unfortunately, I am rather crap at writing from 1st person and I've already written the majority of this story in the way that it is now so I can't just drastically change the POV but definitely, for a future story, I will write from 1st person :)
Next update will be on Wednesday xx
@Kath0183
I hope you get better, honey!! I'm very happy you look forward to reading my story each time I update xx
6/29/16