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Let's Pretend It's Love - Comments, page 5
Very emotional chapter indeed! Many things happened! I have a feeling there might be some animosity between Jess and Presley and I wonder what's in that black box??? Can't wait for the next one! xx
Even if this is my first comment here I've been reading this story since its first chapters!! You always amaze me with your writing, your ideas and how the plot of the story evolved. It's one of my fave fanfictions. Congrats for your work love xx
@LivinLikeLarry
Lol! I love how many o's you put in love because honestly it hits spot on about how Harry feels. Presley is a stubborn, stubborn child. All school related stress is fairly equal I think. My junior year of high school was pretty hard and hectic too. I had a bunch of personal things going on too so that made it ten times worse but I made it through. You will too :) Aww! Thanks!
Lol! Green as God. That's nice alliteration! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!!
Yeah I think harrys in loooooove and knows it but Presley is lying to herself. Smh she needs to realixe she looves him too lol. And while I cant realte directly since Im only in high school, I totally feel your stress and nerves lol. Im a junior and its just like wtf happened to easy classes.
No worries about your writing either its great!
Side note....I read at one part and I thought it saif his eyes were green as god and i was like wuut lol. Anyway. Great chapter!! Im dying to see how Harry reacts to Presley leaving!
@blankspace1
Oh yes! Tried to enter sophomore year hoping for the best and this first week has just been ugh! Thank you so much! The anxiety of writing sex scenes had been killing me for years but now I know I'm pretty capable. Hmm, may have been a little more to Harry than just a hook-up. SAME! Harry is so gorgeous and he always looks so ethereal and healthy and sometimes I don't even think it's humanly possible how beautiful he is! We shall see how things go between them. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!!
First of all, I feel you about struggling to update because of college (I go to university) and it sucks! Secondly, this chapter was so well-written (to me, anyway) and I enjoyed reading it! If it was just a hook-up, I am going to clobber Harry's ass (I'm kidding, obviously :P) I write sex scenes too and I'm always nervous to post them but you got to power through and believe in yourself! And lastly, I'm dying because of the new pictures of Harry! He just makes me cry because he's so goddamn beautiful all the time and I'm like sobbing, saying, "Why are you doing this to me?" Sorry for the long comment, just wanted to let you know that I really loved this chapter and I look forward to see where their relationship goes now that they've become intimate :) xx
@CrumpetsAndTea
Ooooohhh lol thats what i figured but wanted to be sure
and yes omg i probably will get kicked out of the theater if i go see it
@LivinLikeLarry
Yes I am so hype! I might actually need to rent it instead of going to see at at the movies because I'm likely to get kicked out. I couldn't have said it better, two totally different views of their relationship were seen. Yes! Fingers crossed. Haha! a hen do is the british equivalent of a bachelorette party.
Yas dunkirk is going to be aaamazing!!! And great chapter! We get to see how differently Presley and Harry view their relationship...fingers crossed presley comes around!! Also on a side note wtf is a hen do
@ELS1206
Thank you! You're right, this relationship has pretty much been real to Harry from the start. Hmm I suppose we shall find out what Presley's issue is. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!
Love this story! Another beautifully written chapter. Please update again soon!
I don't think that Harry came on too strong, but I think that he has been more into the this relationship than Presley has been from the beginning and so from his perspective the lines are definitely blurred. Presley is definitely coming to terms with her own feelings, but I wonder if there is something else in her past that is keeping her from letting Harry in?
@blankspace1
Thanks! Hopefully Charlotte applies some ice to that burn soon. I really enjoyed writing that scene and it was nice for write Presley so human. I'm sooo ready for Dunkirk! Too bad it's a year away. Yes, Harry is gorgeous in dirt! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!
I loved this chapter! It was jam-packed with many feels etc. and I loved the way Presley bit back at Charlotte :)) The scene between Harry and Presley was beautifully written, very emotional, and yes, I'm SO excited for Dunkirk! Harry looks good even when he's covered in mud and dirt, lol! :) xx
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