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Let's Pretend It's Love - Comments, page 9
Hey,new subscriber here! I love you story,and what I mean by love its like more than I pizza love and trust me I love pizza lol. This is my new favorite fanfic. Oh and please please please make Harry and Presley real bf and gf. Please.
<3Lots of Love<3
@Ransom girl
Yes, Presley's mum has got a bad case of rude. I'm glad you're enjoying this! Thanks for reading!!!
The story is great so far!! I expected the mom to act that way towards Harry though ,but man not even introducing herself surprised me.
@CrumpetsAndTea
No problem!!
I really do like the story, and am even more excited now knowing that you're really getting into it. I look forward to Harry's POV.
Cant walt for another update :D
@Princessp
Thank you for the honest input! I've written quite a few chapters for this story and I admit that some of them may have been shorter or a little rushed. I've noticed the more I've gotten into the story the longer the chapters have become. I was actually debating on wether or not I will include Harry's POV but I do think if I decide to do so it would be beneficial to the story line.
I may have heard of that movie but I've never seen it. I'll have to check it out! Again, thanks for the honest feedback. I'm always looking for ways to improve my writing and it starts with reviewers like you! Thanks for reading and commenting!
Hello :) thanks for updating, I did enjoy chapter, however, if you don't mind me saying, shorter chapters tend to feel a little rushed..and I'm a bit surprised Harry agreed so willingly without even knowing details. I think it would have been nice to see Harry's thought process in his POV, maybe then I would have made more sense to me? But that's just my opinion :)
i love over the plot line of this story, kinda reminds me of my favourite movie - the wedding date.
im excited to see where you take the rest of story, and can't wait to see the reactions of her mom and sister at the dinner when they meet him!!
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@Gummybear240
New subscriber?!? Welcome! Wow, I'm really quite flattered that you would say that!! I'm so glad you love it! As for Presley and Harry having a real relationship, we'll just have to keep reading to find out what happens. Thanks for reading!!!
10/17/15