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@Harrystylesfangirl123
I'm so glad you enjoyed :) !
I totally get what you mean. I've read so many fanfictions were the girl and guy get back together within seconds after an elaborate and cute speech even though one of them (Or both) has said or done something horrible. After all that Harry's been through I think this reaction is the only realistic one and making my character flawed and human are what I strive for.
Again I'm so glad you enjoyed! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
OMG. I'm at work and the last part of the last chapter totally got me and I'm bawling. This was so beautifully written. I like how even when she said all those things it wasn't enough for Harry. Too often in movies, books and or fanfictions it comes too easy and it comes too quick. And in a way, it almost ruins it for me because it's too perfect and too convenient. The best books, movies and or fanfictions are ones where the characters are flawed because they're human, just like ourselves. We too make mistakes. Well done! I can't wait to read the last chapter!
@CrumpetsAndTea
I know what you can do after this story is over! Start a new one! :p lol You're a great writer, I'd totally read something else from you!
I was glad to see that Jessa and Presley were able to work things out and both could apologize. I think that they will remain friends and maybe a new job will good for Presley (although I loved that Harry went to Jessa and asked her to give Presley her job back).
Presley took a lot of time to really think about her feelings for Harry. I think she is fully aware this time or she wouldn't have made the big speech.
I don't think that Harry is playing with her feelings, but I was a little disappointed that Harry didn't return her feelings at that moment. Although I can't blame him. After everything that Presley has put him through. Harry is hurt, but I think he will come around.
Also I was excited that Penny didn't get mad, but instead supported Presley when she wanted to the leave the party and go find Harry.
I'm going to miss this story. Are you sure it has to end?
@MelissaStylesInStyle
Heath Ledger in 10 Things I Hate About You gives me total Harry vibes!
After beign rejected so many times Harry's still pretty sore about everything so it's not going to be easy getting on his good side. It's a bummer for Presley now that's she's finally come to her sense but it's a pretty liberating moment for Harry. He's pretty much let Presley step all over him whilst he goes above and beyond to win her affections and finally he's not gonna have it! He'll come around though.
I am going to miss these two sooo much I don't know what I'm going to do with myself once this story is over. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!!
10 things I hate about you!!!
Anyway, ouch Harry... I feel he's just making her suffer. I'd feel the same as him tbh. His love was rejected SO many times so it wouldn't be fair that it's only when Pres wants it. I can't wait for the next and final chapter. I'm going to miss these two.
Beautiful update. I'm glad both girls came to their senses and decided to be adults. Honestly, I think it is time for Presley to love on with her life, and maybe distance will help their friendship in time. I was a little sad with how things worked out between her and Harry but I can understand how Harry must feel. He was hurt and must be stubborn since he probably wanted her to feel his pain. But I don't think he felt nothing for her, same with Presley. I truly believe they have strong feelings for each other and one way or another, they will find each other again (I hope).
Cant wait for the next chapter!
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I totally agree with everything you said! After constant rejection, Harry's reaction is only normal. He's probably wanting Presley to get a taste of her own medicine but it's highly likely he'll come around. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
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