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Dreaming Of You // If I'm Still Dreaming - Comments, page 34
@JustDont is right! Everybody who appreciates this story should be leaving a comment to show support. This story is outstanding and we should let you know we love it!
This chapter killed me. I'm not sure I'll be able to make it to the end. Pure and simple. The amount of feels is crazy! Please, update!!!!! Xxx
Hello there! I just wanted to say I can't believe how great this story has become. How you portrayed Harry's feelings in this chapter, what can I say? It was as if I could feel him in my heart. And it breaks me because I know he loves her so much and he feels she doesn't love him back. I couldn't really tell if she loves him or not, you have me puzzled, but I can feel there's something else you are not saying, and Harry feels it sometimes but then he forgets about it because he's so jealous and troubled. I love this Harry, vulnerable, thoughtful and mad. You write him beautifully. Never read anything of the sort and that's why I would stand for this story as many times as needed. I'll try to leave comments from now on because I realise you need to know what's in our minds to finish it properly. Everybody should be doing the same because this is so good it hurts!! You are simply amazing! Thank you for writing this to us! Xoxo
Come on, people, just leave a comment! I want an update! :-)
Good gracious lord!! This chapter is so insanely amazing!! Where do I start? I loved it when they went to look for the keys!! Harry can be such a cutie and what happened there? That moment they had made me wonder about her feelings but then Harry became all jealous again, but he got it all wrong. His mind wanders too much and just misread the entire situation! How could he leave like that? I know he feels extremely vulnerable, but come on, Harry!!!!! It's so obvious she has feelings for him but I don't get why she didn't stop him, and why she didn't tell him there's nothing between her and the french lizard. I don't know your plans but you have me pretty nervous, especially knowing there's only five chappies to the end! Goodness, the feels are out of control here!! Thank you for writing this story!! It's the most unique fanfic ever!! I love this story!! Xx
Wow that was tense. One thing I firstly thought was, I never imagined for Harry to be the one to hurrily leave Jeanne! So much is going on right now I don't know where you're going to take us! but amazing chapter as always! This makes me even more unpatient for end!
You're so talented my friend, this story is insanely good. Xx
P.s. I looked up those song lyrics, and that song was really good!!! A little different to what I normally listen too, but this story has really broadened my horizons! :-) Thank you
Hello there friend! Oh this chapter it stabbed me right in the feels! We had all forms of Harry in this chapter! We had jealous Harry, then sexy Harry, and then the "love me" Harry!!! It was too much for my little fangirl heart!! And then the ending.... It sure was emotional for me! Anyway I want Jeanne to fall in love with Harry, because I don't want my cupcake to be hurt!! Ahh I'm so conflicted!! I want him to be happy, but I want Jeanne to be happy too, and I'm not sure if she will be happy with Harry!! Ok! Thank you for updating!! I love how your story makes me ask so many questions!! Until next chapter!! Xoxo
Oh my dear friend. :) You have helped me more than you know! This chapter was just perfection. Harry seems to be coming back with reality now. Kind of. He's so in love with Jeanne it kills me to know all of his feelings. He knows that she just can't love right now and maybe that's what the condom is about. They need that barrier, when its not there sensations are alive and free and having it there, Harry said it himself, "it's not us." Maybe he's just reading into it too much, maybe she stopped taking her birth control (all though I don't think she would, she's extremly responsible), and maybe it's to stop herself from "feeling" him. So many thoughts. I love how she's changed his way of thinking, when he talks about the poems and books but for gods sakes Harry, shut up and enjoy sex. :)
Beautiful chapter as always, I'm so privileged to call you a friend!!
@Ciao Niccie
Goddess divine! So honoured to have you here! I'm happy that you still enjoy it. Things have twisted a lot :) I kindly accept your suggestion of reading! We are nearing the end, hope you like what's coming. Though it would never be as shocking as Hey Jude ;) Sending lots of love to you!!! We miss you a lot!!! xx
@skyfall
Thank you, lovely! So good to have you around! It means a lot that you decided to leave a comment :) I have to catch up with your story! I'm a chapter behind! Thank you so much for reading and caring! Sending love to you! <3 xx
@Ariadne
Oh, thank you so much! So sweet of you! I work a lot in this story and I really, really appreciate it! You make me work harder! I hope you like what's coming! Thank you so much for reading, commenting and being so amazing! xx
@Morgan_Who
My friend! Every time I read your comments I smile so hard it hurts :) I love your comments so much. I'm glad you find the chapter hot, and yes, Harry is this stubborn mess. He can't control himself even if he wants to, and at this point he doesn't really care about anything, which is sort of dangerous. I want to know what you think after the chapter I'm about to post, though I hope to make you lose your words ;) Thank you so much for your support, sweetheart! I just love you so much! <3 xx
@xRockMex
Absolutely right. These two only can manage one another between the sheets, until now ;) Things are definitely going out of hand for Harry. All his questions, ranting and assumptions will hit him hard. But maybe, just maybe it's not only his fault, and Jeanne's control is really starting to have consequences. Balance is difficult when you can't have enough of someone and that someone makes it even harder. We'll see where it leads. You know this story is meant to be a bit frustrating. Hope you all can manage what's coming. Thank you so much for reading and commenting, my friend. It really means a lot to me. Sending love and kisses!!! <3 xx
@Harry_cookie
Sexily frustrating! I loved it! Well, he's looking at all the wrong places, and things will go out of hand for him very soon because of that. Your fear of Harry ruining everything might become true very soon :/ He has a lot to understand, but he doesn't two feet in front of him... Thank you so much for reading and taking your time to comment! Your feedback is everything to me! It really helps! Sending love, dear! Stay lovely! <3 xx
@KAOT
Thank you so much for those kind words, my friend. They mean a lot coming from you. I do work hard visually and with the choice of words, so I'm happy it shows somehow :)
And Harry... I guess it's easy for him to think everything is about him. Sometimes he's so blind he doesn't even see when things are actually about him ;) The dangers of love! Not such a good listener either xD He's definitely in trouble!!! Thank you so much for reading and always commenting, my friend, and for all your support and your friendship. It really matters to me. Thank you :) You know I love your story <3 xx
These last two chapters were extremely intense. Jeanne had gotten Harry to become so vulnerable with her, but it's understandable why she'd want to stay in control. This woman is no ordinary girl, and I think that's what excites Harry and infuriates him. Life would be a lot easier for the two if his deep and abiding love for her was requited. I can't wait to see how you end this amazing lover's tale. You're a magnificent writer, love! Xx
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