Dreaming Of You // If I'm Still Dreaming - Comments, page 33

Oh my god. This chapter is so good, I love everything that you did with Zayn and Harry, it worked so well!
Harry doesn't realise that people can see straight through him as his love is so strong for Jeanne. The tattoo idea was genius, you make this story so Good! I truly love it xx

What a lovely chapter my friend!! The whole thing was such a masterpiece!! Drunk Harry and High Zayn was just hilarious to me, even though I do agree with Harry, Zayn is a genius!! And I lovee your interpretation about Harry's mermaid tattoo! But it did hurt my heart to hear Harry say that he didn't love Jeanne! That hurt my fragile Fangirl heart! I do feel bad for poor Harry though!! He is always so hard on himself :( Anyway, I hope I'm ready for the next couple of chapters!! I know that they are going to be Amazayn! Sorry I had to do that he was in this chapter!! Until next chapter!! Xoxo

p.s. I loved how you used the word ardently..... You see my favorite book is Pride and Prejudice, so of course I watched the movie, so in the movie, Mr. Darcy just says "I love you, most ardently." So I will forever think of that word in that context and that just made me so happy!! :) Thanks!

Ah I can't wait! Well, I can because I feel as though I'm not prepared for the end. The way she was being described i thought of a siren right way! It's a perfect description of her but it's not all she's about, she has more depth then that. Poor Harry, trying so hard to get away but traveling across the world doesn't change his heart and soul.

Lovely update as always friend!!

Been refreshing this page all weekend! Finally! ♥ I find myself drowning in this story. Poor Haz. Thank you for another chapter to live off for a while. Love, fivenormalguyswithanabnormaljob.

Poor Harry, he's hurting

@umakemestrong
Hello, beautiful! I'm so glad you loved it! You are my idol! Thank you so much for being this adorable and enthusiastic! <3 xx

@skyfall
Hello, my friend! I'm glad you liked the update! It was a lot of work. As my friend KAOT says, a true love story never ends ;) Thank you so much to you for being so lovely and supportive! It really means a lot to me :D <3 xx

@girlfromthenorth
Thank you so much for this amazing feedback, I loved everything about your comment, especially the boyfriend part xD God knows I've done the same ;) So I'm glad this time is to read my story! I do put a lot in this story, hours of writing and editing, researching and learning, because I learn a lot through it. It's so worthy when people appreciate it and feel thrilled about it. I know it's quite unconventional and even tricky, but I enjoy challenges. Thank you so much for joining me in this ride. I really hope not to let you down! You know, here things are never simple, except when Louis say so ;) You are amazing! <3 xx

@yellowdiamonds
Thank you, my dear friend for those lovely words and for being my comment 1000. It means a lot to me :D Well, all I can say is that things are going to twist a lot before the end, so hang on! Thank you so much for reading and for being such a cutie, talented friend! <3 xx

@softballchick79
No, don't hand me the pen! You have to keep writing, Professor! Much love! <3 xx

@Somebody you know
Thank you for being so supportive and for those lovely words! It means so much because I work so much in this story! I'm happy having people who enjoy it :D I know it can be puzzling and frustrating, but everything has a meaning! Please, have patience through the end. Things will never be as simple as they might seem! xx

@JustDont
Hello, dear! So happy to finally see one of your comments. What you did mean so much to me, you can't imagine, so I'm happy that you still like the story after all. I know the building up of this story is quite frustrating. I hope it makes sense by the end! Working to get there soon enough! Thank you for your kind words. I work a lot on Harry's character. I wanted to do something different with him, and I'm please some people like him :) I do need a lot of feedback at this time mainly to ponder how you'd react to the ending, because I know you have expectations, and very different expectations. Sending lots of love to you. Thank you for being so supportive and caring! xx

@Harry_cookie
Oh, the 'sweet Jane' moment! He surely forgot quickly about that! Harry's focus is totally wrong 100% of the time, and now we'll have the consequences. He doesn't realise he just keep showing Jeanne how immature and jealous he is. But Harry feels to vulnerable as you say, and intimidated by her so he simply can't face her because he knows a negative would crush him. I'm glad you enjoy the emotional roller coaster ride though! It was kind of exhausting to write, so I'm glad you appreciate it! Thank you so much for reading and commenting! I love to have you around! xx

@xRockMex
Yes, I know it was a bit unexpected but Harry's mind is all over the place and he can't manage his feelings or suspicions anymore. I just need to add some new pieces to the puzzle and then things will start turning quickly. You know this is a mystery, and with mystery comes surprises, a lot of surprises ;) Thank you for being so caring and supportive, my friend. It really means a lot to me! <3 xx

@Morgan_Who
Oh, my friend, you are a poet! Loved the stab in the feels! Why aren't writing a story?!?!?! Well, it was quite emotional, isn't it? All the mental process until he left killed me. I struggled a lot to write this chapter because I knew what would happen at the end. I love my vulnerable Harry, and I hate to see him suffering, but it's for the sake of the story, believe me. Harry and his feelings are all over the place and he sense Jeanne is not there, so he should probably could down a bit and re evaluate the whole situation, from his own feelings to hers. Space and time can work miracles! Thank you so much for sticking to this unusual story, my dear! You gave me the strength to carry on. You have been day since the beginning! And I'm so grateful! Please, don't lose you patience just yet! It 'll all make sense by the very end. thank you so much for always commenting. And I'm glad to give you something new :) I love that song and it popped into my mind right there, so I needed to put it. It's a cover from the original song by Lou Reed, amazing songwriter and musician, God bless his soul. xx

@KAOT
Harry is definitely reading too much into it, obsessing over a fear when it's him with the girl. But after all that happened he feels overexposed and vulnerable, and also hurt, and he can't let it go, at the point of leaving without much things said. Something tells me he might start regretting this mad decision the moment his mind quieten down a bit. Because passion is sometimes a bad counsellor ;) And as for Jeanne, of course she's not trying to get pregnant with Harry's child, as she seems quite desperate to keep him away. So many contradictions!

I'm glad you enjoyed though! You have the credit for 'kissing and grasping' xD No, you helped me a lot through the chapter, because it was quite a challenge and you just listened to my ranting. For that I thank you, and for being so amazing and caring. Can't wait for our big plans, my friend! <3 xx

@skyfall
I 100% AGREE!!LOL:))

LOOVEE THIS!
U R MY IDOL!:)

Great update!!!:*
luv this! Luv u for writing it;))
I don't want it to end...:"(
tnx for the great world u created with beautiful words and feelings:)

First of all - I love this story. I have been reading it non stop in a very short time, involving night time, hiding my phone under the blanket so my boyfriend won't wake up.
A) I like the fact that you clearly has put your soul in it. The language is so fluent and easy to read, with punctuation and everything. It has a great impact on the story, and it's fun to read.
B) I also love that you have created a new concept, and not the usual way of writing a fiction about our man Styles. It keeps me on the edge all the time, because I have no clue on how it will develop.
Of all the fiction I've read this is my absolute favorite. You are amazing. Looking forward to the last chapters, though dreading it aswell. Follow me on Tumblr if you wish, fivenormalguyswithanabnormaljob! Keep up the good work :)