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Show Me Where it Hurts - Comments, page 6

holy shit i have no idea who it is BUT IM SO EXCITED

OMG!! Your cliffhangers kill you know?!?!
maybe it's Anne?! What if it's louis? Or one of the 1D members. Could it be Harry? Idk! I'm not sure! Please updateeeeee!! And Goodluck with revision!!

Ok annie is just too weak why doesnt she own a gun or took a self defense class how she let this happened again did she really think will wasnt gonna come after her again she too naive stupid weak abd dependent she should of been prepared she starting to annoy me

I hope Harry it's harry... I have a feeling he wanted to suprise them by coming home earlier!

It can't be Harry since he's still on a plane to get there. I'm hoping it's not Ivy. Hopefully it's someone capable of saving Annie and beating the shit out of Will. He deserves to rot in jail.

@Delilah
Thank god lol something to look forward to after work tonight!

@Icecle123
I just hope it's someone who can help

@Hkychk
lol sorryyyy! i’m just revising for a while and then i’ll probably update later to give myself a break from my work haha

@Hkychk
I kind of agree with you. I don't think it's going to be Harry because he wouldn't hve been able to get back in time. Idk maybe it's the police? I really can't say

I can't deal with all these cliffhangers. I have a feeling it's gonna be Ivy though.

It's gonna be Harry hopefully. The suspense is killing me!

I'm gonna cry I'm gonna cry I hate him

That sick fuck! Annie should have kneed him in the balls. If he hurts Ivy and Noah in any way, Harry will kill that bastard.

k i fucking love this story, but this shit is too much for me. if he hurts the cute little children like seriously...i will crawl into this story and beat the shit out of him myself.
please dont let him hurt ivy :`(

@Icecle123
OMG me too ahaha! I wish he would just burst through the door! I hope nothing happens to ivy and Noah :(

@Delilah
Just believe in yourself like we believe in you:)

@lunareclipse10
that is amazing! thank you.. i hope i keep up the good work for you guys!

I feel like harry should burst through the doors with a superman cape and save the day.... Haha just kidding
But does it count if I comment 5 times ? Haha

Omg please update again!!!!

ymartinez28 ymartinez28
5/27/14

@Delilah
guys please comment/vote so we can find out!!
i love both of your stories and I'm such a massive fan! I'm even getting my friends to read your stories. You're so talented, please never stop writing <3